A Wife Watching Fantasy, Too Far Ch. 02

When she said "No" and you fucked her, it was rape.

Plus the ability to have a coherent conversation in the throes of passion? Seriously? WTF? Either you have never had sex or you are an idiot. Either way, keep your retardedness to yourself, you're lowering the IQ of the site.

The writer is indeed,an idiot

His fantasy is crap.

PSA

do the world a favor and kill yourself

i'm glad

you listed in your bio you have no fetishes i would hate to see a sick fuck like you with some, maybe if you went to school or read a book you would not be so fucking stupid.

another worthless couple that have no marriage

hopefully she gets knocked up by a lover or catches aids that infects them both so they can rot away.

do you know how much these two have to be mentally ill to do this

belongs in fetish raped gay cuck

Congratulations!!!!

Excellent chapter and story!!!

not up to your standard

great to see a follow up, maybe its just the transition in the story, but this installment could have been knocked out in a few minutes, and it reads like it was, this isn't the quality read like your other efforts, the wife's emotional change turned to quick,also husband missing out on round two unusual for your stories,.....please return to form and finish this and the others in a timely manner!

re: anonymous-not up to your standards

That's a laughable statement. This writer doesn't have any standards. He writes for the fetish lovers, the sickos that get a hard on watching others ravish their wives. I guess, if that turns you on, have at it. As for me, I'm passing this guy up from now on. I don't find fetish erotic. Rating:0*

great chapter

Did you ever notice how those who leave hateful comments seldom leave their names? As always extremely sexy.

Sequels suck

The original ended in a good place! It left a lot of leeway in the reader's imagination for marital adjustment and development (both good and not so good!) This follow-up takes away the tension of how they MIGHT change and spells out a fairly extreme option that doesn't seem to bode well for them! Sometimes, less is more!

I found the after-poker sex recounting remarkably non-erotic. Bull's Sweetie did some more conniving, beyond her prior range and outside what I had pieced together as her concern level. She became an independent agent of ill will, which I believe the Chief Bull would NOT have tolerated! Also, Sweetie's accounting of the sex itself was fairly scanty AND ugly!

3*

One more time

I've loved all of Newbie's stories from the first one I can recall reading (the beach vacation story) but this chapter is ultimate hot writing. The dialogue between husband and wife having fantasy sex is superb. High Five for this one Newbie.

I love up themes !!

I cannot have enough of your stories! Keep them coming!

Btw, if you could send me the end of Latin wife, I'd much appreciate !
l3bcw45eq1i9ikd@jetable.org

Thanks

I like most of

your stories, but this one is more weird than erotic

Pretty Good, But...

I enjoyed the story as a whole, especially part one. It just felt like you were building to a big finale of the wife getting corrupted by the bikers...which happened, but we didn't actually get to "see" it. Getting some details from the wife just wasn't enough. Now, as I said, I enjoyed the story as a whole and thought the set up was exceptionally good and erotic. It's just the ending left much to be desired. I am very much looking forward to the sequel though. I think you write very well and there's a lot of potential with these characters in this setting. Keep it up.

Great storyteller. You could be a great screenplay writer, if you could get a good director that could fully convey your stories into film.

Surprise!

Your timing is excellent ... you deliver suspense and anticipation so well. The method and style are even better than the content. As you stated, we fans can request your additional writings/chapters via email. Please send any and all additional writings to ... offbrat@yahoo.com thanks in advance

Like your stories very much

I really like your stories very much and even bought them online only to find that they were the sames stories incomplete. If you can not finish them and paying customers are not motivation enough for you to continue. Would you consider letting other writers adopt them and write additional chapters?

Thank you
Jim
Avcpuguy@gmail.com

hates fags but

loves taking it in the pooper while swallowing a sword, very weird... total sicko....

Damn!

That was very erotic! Please send me the continuation of Janet's adventures.
Johnny1705@yahoo.com. Fantastic stories!

Please finish!!

That was very erotic! Please send me the continuation of Janet's adventures to crew_dawg1@yahoo.com

Love your stories

Hi, - is there any chance you could send me the rest of the story?
Volume II: Janet, An Uncontrollable Need For It

PURE SHIT

UNO ESTRELLA

YOUR STORIES COULD BE BETTER

YOUR STORIES ALWAYS END UP WITH THE COUPLE TOGETHER STILL/ PEOPLE WITH WATCHING OR CUCKHOLDING FANTASIES NEED A CAUTIONARY EXAMPLE TOO. THERE ARE POST ONLINE OF MEN WITH CUCKHOLDING AND WATCHING FANTASY THAT THEIR WIVES LEAVE THEM BECAUSE THEY LOSE RESPECT FOR THEIR HUSBAND OR THEY NO LONGER FIND THEM SEXUALLY PLEASING. THERE ARE A LOT OF MARRIAGES BROKENED UP BECAUSE FANTASY BECOMES REALITY. NOT A HUGE POPULATION OF PEOPLE COULD HANDLE THIS LIFESTYLE. EVERYONE IS DIFFERENT AND MOST OR NEARLY THE HUMAN POPULATION CAN'T HANDLE THIS. A WOMAN COULD FALL IN LOVE WITH OTHER MEN WITH SEX AND INTIMACY. I FORGOT WHAT BIOLOGICAL RESPONSES IN WOMAN THAT CAUSES THE FEELINGS OF LOVE DURING SEX BUT IT LASSTS FOR HOURS IN WOMEN WHILE IN MEN LAST FOR ABOUT AN HOUR. THAT IS WHY PEOPLE WITH LOVE AFFAIRS LEAVE THEIR SPOUSES. WITH ONLY SEX AND ROMANCE INVOLVED AND WITHOUT THE STRESS OF MARRIAGE ITS EASIER TO FALL IN LOVE. YOUR SPOUSE NO LONGER DOES IT FOR YOU BECAUSE YOUR BRAIN TELLS YOU THEY ARE NO LONGER DESIRABLE. ITS JUST LIKE SOME WOMEN DON'T HAVE THE MATERNAL GENE AND HAVE TO WORK HARDER AND BE MORE CONCIOUS OF THEIR LACK OF MATERNAL INSTINCT. BUT MOST WOMEN DON'T HAVE THE SAME ISSUE. WOMEN WHO SHARE THEIR HUSBAND CUCKHOLDING FANTASY ARE RARE. ITS LIKE SOME PEOPLE GET SEXUAL HIGHS WITH WATER SPORTS WHILE A HUGE POPULATION OF PEOPLE DON'T. OR SOME WOMEN LIKE ANAL BUT LIKE 70 OR 80 PERCENT OF WOMEN THAT DON'T. YOUR STORIES STORIES ARE GOOD WITH PEOPLE WITH THAT KIND OF KINK. I HATE WHEN PEOPLE ON BOTH SIDES COMPLAIN. YOU HAVE TO FIND SOMEONE WITH YOUR COMPATIBLE NATURE. I KNOW A GUY WHO HAS A KINK OF A WOMAN BEATING HIM UP AND CHEATING ON HIM AND LEAVING. NOT A LOT OF WOMEN OUT THERE THAT FIT THAT BILL. I HATE IT WHEN PEOPLE SAY THAT THEY HAVE SOME KIND OF HANG UP OF SOME SORT OR NOT ADVENTUROUS ENOUGH. IMAGINE YOUR SPOUSE LEAVING YOU BECAUSE SHE LOSES ALL RESPECT FOR YOU. IN YOUR STORY YOUR CHARACTER'S PARTNER ALWAYS FIND SOMEONE WITH THE SAME KINK OR ARE VERY COMPATIBLE. IMAGINE YOUR WIFE NO LONGER HAVING ORGASM WITH YOU BECAUSE SHE PREFERS DIFFERENT MEN. AND PEOPLE WHO COMPLAIN THAT IT IS SHIT BECAUSE THEY DON'T UNDERSTAND IT IS JUST THEIR MAKE-UP. OF COURSE YOU DON'T UNDERSTAND, BECAUSE YOU DON'T HAVE THE SAME KIND OF KINK. JUST LIKE A DOM WILL NEVER GET SATISFACTION BEING A SUB OR A SUB CAN NEVER BE A DOMINATE. SOME CAN GET OFF BEING BOTH. YOUR STORY TELLING IS GOOD WITH MORE HUMAN EMOTIONS INVOLVED. BUT IT WOULD BE NICE IF YOU WENT OUTSIDE THE BOX AND HAVE A GUY WITH A WATCHING KINK WHILE THE WIFE DOESN'T AND SHE LOSES ALL RESPECT AND TRUST IN HER HUSBAND AND HE GETS SEXUALLY FRUSTRATED WITH HER HE BECOMES DEPRESSED.

cant wait to see what happens

love all your stories. can you send me conclusion to Janet's story? nlacxo@gmail.com

There are a few inconsistencies in this story, like how did her panties get so full of cum if the first thing she did was let let the guy take them off her. If the sex occurred elsewhere, and she put her panties back on to return to her room, this wasn't made clear. Still i like your writing, just a shame you don't finish most of the stories you write. A fault a lot of authors on this site share.

I enjoy husband and wife dialogue stories

It seems you don't write anymore but if you do again please finish these stories. It would also be interesting to have them written from the women's perspective. What were they thinking because it seems that at some level they were pushing their husband's so they could play while making him believe it was being done because he was pushing the issue.

Another Great Story!

Absolutely Incredible

Is there more? CarnalProdigy@gmail.com

Completion..

can you send me conclusion to Janet's story? champs472@gmail.com.

there is much more ground to cover here; develop the relationship with janet & marie & scott & marie. to say nothing of another interlude between janet & huggs.

then, their returning to home life. did she get pregnant & by whom? did just janet enjoy her sexual awakening & was scott reduced to an observer or was he allowed to be an active participant?

Great read!

Please send continuation of the story to crich1992@yahoo.com

A great story real hot hot. Can're wait for the next one...ca97

details please

hi newbie 2008,
great story(ies) indeed.
About this last part, I/we would've loved to hear Janet explain how it all started when she went back to the hotel with Marie, but without the men ... where do the 3 guys came from? how did the action started? She mentions having had great orgasms with them ... we want to know!! Also, she mentionned glass doors ... did she do it in the open, for everyone to see? And, hubby replied that he only saw the second part ... so there is ground for him to get Janet to explain the first part!!!
Anyway, thanks again for your stories ... keep up the goor writing :-)

Inspiring

Loved part one and part two,just need part 3 now !!!!,my wife is dead against sharing but if it was going to happen it would be along the lines you describe,so erotic when other men cum inside your wife and you can see her gaping and cum leaking out (not that I've experienced it) Great stories please keep them up on the mature wife/reluctance theme,I love it ,well done

Where's Volume II: Janet, An Uncontrollable Need For It?

And, why have you stopped posting?

There are a whole lot more than just a few awful submissions on this site!

There a huge group of authors with unrealized talents that could hone their craft if they’d reach out for help!

There are some very talented authors on this site and you are/were one of them, but for reasons unknown you seem to have let life guide you in other directions!

So if there's more, please let me know where to find you and/or them!

Sincerely, Rik

PS: I copied this note & added an email address via your bio page!

Take Her Back Again

Wife lived her desires and her husband's wishes for his pretty woman to fuck other men got him what he wanted. Except it was more than he wished for.

Absolutely the best!

When will you do the sequel?

Volume II: Janet, An Uncontrollable Need For It

Why All The Anger?

I think it's strange to see all of these readers who have sent anger and hatred to the comments section of this author's story. The "Loving Wives" category is filled with relationships that involve others. All these hate-spewing trolls should just stick with a category that works for them. I don't remember seeing an anger management category though. Nobody wants to see your disgusted comments. That being said, I didn't appreciate this second story as much as the first. I felt like it was incomplete, where you left out pretty much what this whole set of stories was totally about. The husband wanted to see his wife with other dudes, and she wanted to do it. And when it supposedly happened, all we get is some paltry explanation that left me frustrated and short-changed. This was not nearly as erotic as your first story. And...thank you for your effort and creativity.

great story.

I greatly enjoyed the story . Part one was awesome and part would have been alittle better if the group sex and the husband missing out was done differently. If you could send me the rest of the story, Volume II: Janet, An Uncontrollable Need For It I would appreciate it. Hrealq@aol.com

0 stars!

More sick,cuck,bullshit on cuckorotica!

great!!!

CAN'T WAIT FOR ANOTHER CHAPTER!!!

good story

This is a very good story. Send me the rest of the story at mrjohnadams444@gmail.com.