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Enjoyable reading.
A very good beginning, to what I hope is a good story. Please let this tale continue.
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Quinn is an interesting character, full of passion and willing to charge headlong into things, even when chances of victory are much in doubt. Since the full time change to male, that's become an even stronger trait for him. For such a young half-elf, Quinn has endured a great deal. Hopefully, I'll get a chance to tell more of those tales. I know I had fun writing this particular piece.
The 'h' in Theláyna is mostly silent; the name translates to "devotion." She has a few tales, too. Her mother was a time traveller ... and, well, I hope I get a chance to tell her background, too.
If I didn't have to work, I'd crank out a lot more stories, that's for sure.
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