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I won't forget We

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by twelveoone11/06/12

5ed

becuase (sic) check yours, you are a new writer
"Poetry is my new hobby, even if she never looks."
this all seems stream of conscious, cut,cut,cut,
avoid some of the "I"
You got some good material
"The secrets she told me (while they might be lies) will never come out."
the trick is to make it concise
good luck

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by tazz31711/07/12

FAILURE TO SEE BOTH SIDES

of a person or an issue...TK U MLJ LV NV

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by MisterSade11/24/12

Thanks for the comments. Stream of consciousness is my natural state.

I'll edit and repost.

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