Girlfriend gets a Real Man

What delightful prose.

A very moving Real Loving Wife story. 5*

Writer slime

Filth for SICKOS

putting her man down

just another big rod put down for her man. If it had been me would have just told her to leave with him as she will be wanting him again and some other big rod guys.

Not my thing

But to each his own. Poor character development and no motivation for conduct of any of them. Needed at least 2 full pages for development of story

????????????

Where is a wife or fiancee???

she is not an 'ex' after that? the guy is a twit, if he did not insist she leave, with or without vincent. He gets what he deserves.

Weak and pathetic

with characters who talk like robots! A story that's been told a million times before - and always a million times better.

PSA

CUCK AUTHOR ALERT............Use the gun on yourself, it will save the courts the trouble and do society some good.

hard life

can't write, not very bright and a loser pretty well sum up the idiot that posted this story.

Just another

just another one-hand typist that doesn't know the difference between "waist" and "waste". How sad.

forced eh they held a gun on you as they fucked i guess

pure gay leaning cuck trash

actually cant be cuck arent married. time to move and find a female that isnt a slut god knows what diseases she will bring home.

pathetic

wow i have read some garbage on here before but this one takes the cake. There is nothing here to actually read. the supposed writer has no imagination at all and can't proof read and edit his sorry attempt at writing. Please do us a favor either quit trying to write or attend a class or two for writing. perferable english. anything else would be way to complicated for you.

I Guess You Didn't Write This

To win a popularity contest. My guess: you are a woman and your fantasy is humiliating and emasculating your man. Jeez, please God, don't make me this woman's man.

Why the humilation

Fine...she is screwing around on her boyfriend, and he accepts it...but why the humilation, why does she add the abuse? Makes no sense to me! The relationship is flawed if she cares so little about him that she verbally abuses him while screwing another.

Preggers?

she needs to have a swollen belly, but still want big cocks.

Wow

I see the mean comments . I think some are afraid its them being treated like that and maybe a possible reality for those people. So buck up enjoy life before it's gone!

Really

Not good. Not so bad as some are saying (it is a cleverness competition when criticizing posting authors, after all), but not good. Contrived plot, poorly told, multiple writing errors, ridiculous characterization.

screw my wife

Very hot but I'll agree I could do without the humiliation factor.

That said I frequently fantasize about another man screwing my wife andwould love for Vincent to fuck my wife 's brains out.

Recommendation

On SOL (storiesonline.net) A.A.Nemo published his newer running husband story.
The title is "Concordia". No cuck story..............I read it and it is a good one.

Oh yes, she is a deeper, NOT! Boyfriend needs to die before he breeds more cuckie wimps like himself.

So that was good for him

He discovered she was a slut BEFORE they got married so now dumping her is a piece of cake! Congratulations to him!

Simple solution

Find a new girlfriend that's not a disgusting slut.

This story made my little penis so stiff

I hope my Mistress will let me rub it. Alison deserves a real man and dano is inadequate fortunately Vincent stepped in and provided Alison with the real cock she deserved. Maybe in chapter two dano can clean up after Alison is satisfied by Vincent again.

All on the flick of a coin!

4*

Taste It

I'd have wanted to see what that filled pussy tasted like!

YGBK

Derek# HAS to be kidding! How long has Dano been dating Sweetie? WHY is Sweetie still dating him, if she diesn't like his (self-described) very little pecker? Derek# neglects (among many other things) to inform We-The-Readers whether Dano is rich or, at least, successfully employed. Derek# also likes to narrate events which coulda been developed much better with dialogue.

The seduction is scary fast. Bull drops trou, Sweetie grabs both dicks momentarily, then drops Dano's and starts fellating Bull. Subtle. A woman of action! Can coitus be far away? Nope. Dano, of course, is the host so he cannot walk out to his car and drive away! Far away! His sense of decency keeps him quiet and still seated, until it is hus turn to be humiliated more obviously by the woman he seems to be sponsoring for this vacation! I guess REALLY big peckers are to big to host STIs? Take a swim in the newly stocked germ pool? Pick your disease(s).

nice story

and yes I would have loved being her boyfriend. 4yourpleasureiam