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you really need professional mental health.
After enough women have left you suicide seems like a good idea.
Believable and meets all the tests of a quality story
All our worlds need a shove every now and then, because we get into a routine, rut or whatever and we need to find an excuse to do something totally uncharacteristic. This is one of those half finished stories that leaves one wanting more. How about it?
Bravo!
I thought the story was great for the person who said they read the whole thing in disgust you could've stopped at anytime it's just fantasy/fiction it doesn't mean the author actually condones the behavior irl don't hate on someone else's art if u don't like it just move on but to call someone out for erotic story on a site like literotica is kinda ridiculous lol keep up the good work newbie2008 I look forward to many a night with your writing
Another chapter ?
I really did enjoy the story but the beach scene was a bit much . I was hopeing for the rest of the trip to be Henry enjoying Janet as well as her husband . I'll be looking forward to the rest of the story . I do think she protested to much after enjoying Henry so much . Clearly she wanted Henry as much as her husband wanted to watch . The bit about the condom was VERY different and quite kinky .
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