The Unaffordable Vacation Ch. 02

smell of come

told me how bright this author was when you can't spell four letter words i can only pity you.

Cuckold Friday

Congrads you must be so proud.

Non Erotic Rutting

Lik This ceases to be erotic at some point. Just animals screwing. YUK

The first one was just about acceptable.

This one certainly wasn't. It was crude, uninspired and a long way short of erotic.

Nice progression

Keep up the work man, it was great

Good story

First off, yeah, there were a couple of typos, but you even see those in books from traditional publishers now. I still gave it a 5.

I thought the first part, the buildup with Henry, was very good. This chapter was good, but not of the same quality as that or some of your other stories. But even when you're not at your best, you're still better than 99% of the writers on here. Keep up the good work and good luck.

Great story

keep it up I love all your work

Over the top action . . .

. . . with break out the thesaurus language. While I always appreciate the full use of our wonderful language when appropriate, I think sex on the beach with five itinerant young Mexican boys is prime time for a raw use of language. They fucked her cunt one after the other and used her for a cum dump.
It's only the vocabulary I have a problem with. I was wondering if Newbie would finish this story as I read his offering the other day I now wait with high expectation for the next part of this vacation adventure. Thanks Newbie!

The only thing I found real in this story

Is how pissed the wife is with herself and her useless husband. Stick a fork in this marriage because it. Is. Done.

By the way, she should get checked for STD's because unprotected sex with six guys is definately a candidate for multiple STD's, plus pregnancy and a raging yeast infection. That much aperm would throw off the ph levels and let me tell you, it's not a possibility...it would be a fact!

Nice 2nd part

I prefer your longer stories usually, but that's ok with 2nd part.

Can u send me the end of Latin wife please? Here is the address

l3bcw45eq1i9ikd@jetable.org

Thanks much

Chapter I v. Chapter II

I thought Chapter I was really good. It was good because of the character development, which I thought was lacking in Chapter II. Had Henry's character continued into the second Chapter, the tale would have been much more interesting and erotic. Having said that, I enjoy your writing, particularly "Watching My Wife Fuck For Three Days". Hope you continue.

Cant wait to see what happens the next week! Please do not keep us waiting too long for that!

Thanks

For finally putting up Chapter 2!

Your story and the overwhelming suggestion is that she discovered strange cocks with hubby present and watching was erotic. She also likes getting laid by other guys. She is very good at working him to thinking first that it is his idea and she'll do it because she loves him and - oh ya, it is really exciting and great pleasure.

One thing I noticed, the big guy in the other tent when he woke up on the beach. He witnessed her totally making out, making sex, making love withthe guy and the kissing and intamacy that goes with exquisite and mind blowing sex - her telling himthat he woke up and told her to do it - no he didn't but then he is too into his kinks and buys her story. In reality, she is well into sleeping with other guys and, of course - on the trip back home - how about sleeping one night with Henry and alternating back and forth with the guys. She'll make love with Henry and she'll find a few players at each of their stops, pretend to be just having fn and drinks with hubby but then slowly get him to want to play again.

Our little girl has turned into a hot little sex fiend.

Chapter 3???

the story took

an ugly turn

Part I - 4 stars
Part II - 2 stars

An Entertaining Conclusion

I enjoyed the conclusion to this...very erotic and entertaining. Was glad to see the wife get carried away with everything the following morning, yet still be bitchy about the whole thing. Would like to see a sequel to this, where the wife being unable to help herself to more depravity deepens the conflict. Good work.

Not as good

I liked it on the whole, but I missed Henry and the boat. And the oral promise was not really fulfilled. Still gets 5 stars from me though...

do you know what you do with a FUCK PIG

split roast her send her documents in his case both should ingest large quantity of rat poison and rid the world of two liberals.

Honestly

Not as good as part 1 unfortunately. I enjoyed the build-up towards henry and would have hoped it would involve him more than some anonymous guys.

Memories that last

Clearly this story took a turn for the worse when they went to the beach . Giving the guys blow jobs while hubby watched and or fingered her would have been better . Five loads on her face , tits and in her mouth would have been very sexy . Still , the beach scene was hot as hell and i look forward to reading the next chapter in this series .

I think a return to just the three of them with Henry getting some much needed oral sex and maybe them double penetrating her also . She is still dealing with society teaching women this is slutty while men are free to screw anything that has a hearbeat . Lets see where it all leads .

Sandman

Great Author but...

I really like your stories, particularly the slow build-up. I must say that your female characters are more believable. Retrieving a used condom from the garbage and stuffing it into your wife's vagina? I don't think many of your male readers have that particular fantasy. Regardless I do enjoy reading your stories and wanted more. This story deserves to be continued and your Latin wife story (chapters 1-8 of 23) is a real teaser. So I went across to the site you mentioned in your biography and searched for your name. I was disappointed that the rest of the Latin wife story wasn't there. All the stories seem to have already been posted on Literotica but "New Years Risk and Reward" was a free download so I decided to sign up and check it out. It turned out that this has an extended ending to that posted on literotica so I decided to pay my money and download "Fantasy in Paradise". What a rip-off. This is completely identical to "The Unaffordable Vacation". Definitely a better title though.

Another excellent story. 5 Stars for this one, too.

It was a very good story. Hot as hell. My one disappointment was that she didn't suck off at least some the guys on the beach, if not all of them. Some of them would had the stamina and desire to fuck your wonderfully very hot wife after she sucked them off. Also it would have been better had she admitted to sucked off and fucked two guys at the end when you fail asleep. She claimed, and she may have been right as far as you knew, that you had agreed to her sucking and fucking them before she did it. That would made the story hotter still.

All of that said, it still was a great effort on your part. Keep writing.

a disapponting addition after chapter 1

it seems that after a good story premise is established (hubby, the wife and henry) you tried to see how far and how fast you could take it away from that premise - it would have been good to develope further the relationship, and where it went after wifey got knocked up by henry - leave the gang bangs out of it

Great story

Looking forward to the next installment!

Be careful what you wish for?

And when you get it, divorce is the answer. Dummy.

Wow!

Great story.....just hoping you write more.

Yeah, right to another level...

...she gets fucked an he watches...poor sucker

My wife got fucked

By a group of niggers, and now she's gona have a nigger baby. She got drunk one night at a party and this is what happened to her. I hope to god she don't have an STP. I don't want to lose her, but I don't want to get the dose either. What do I do now?

Great as usual

I read a lot and I think you are one of the best. I wish you write more. Thanks a lot.

We are anxiously awaiting your next many chapters of this great story

You started with a seemingly 'normal' story but created a very,, very hot and exciting one. Don;t abandon this! This is too good not to be a long and very involved story.

Great Story

I am very impressed with your writing. You are a great story teller. Your ability to capture the right pace for erotic build-up is exceptional. Waiting for for the next chapter.

Great story!!

I loved the story and the way it was told. I hope you write the next chapter soon.

Holy Great

Please write more. You're a very very good writer. I'm addicted I your story. I should be sleeping as it's almost morning now but I can't.

BEST STORIES ON LITEROTICA

EXCELLENT. I ALSO LIKED NEW YEARS RISK AND REWARD,

Kepp it coming...

I'd love to see my wife fucked by five guys too but I think she'd like to suck the come out of them as well. She loves to have come in her mouth and then let it all drip out and down her chin and neck. She says she likes the sensation as the hot come rolls across her skin.

Even more cuck bullshit!

1 star!

I agree with the 2 previous comments but...........

I still like the premise of the story, as do probably MANY other readers. It does need some conclusion.......

How many diseases does she have?

Even for fiction this was poorly conceived and badly written. You never convince me that the husband wants this. It feels like a slut wife satisfying her own carnal desires without regards, really, to her husband. Could she possible show him less love or respect than she does? Just awful.

Great Story

I love your stories - keep them coming and disregard the haters.

oh boy oh boy oh boy

In as much as this is/was a fantasy I can actually see something like this happening. But I have to agree with one other comment, that this, was all actually a desire of the guys wife and she had knew just how to manipulate her stupid husband to get what she really wanted. But all in all not a bad story.

A very sad story...

fantasy or not this is a very sad story...This man had no respect or love for his wife!!! What kind a man do those things to the woman he loves? He should be sent to an asylum...

Fantastic!

If there is more to this story I would love to read it!

CarnalProdigy@gmail.com

Too raunchy

This ending would have been better if she sucked off the guys on the beach and then went back to the hotel room to fuck both her husband and the huge cock. The thought of endless lines of nameless faceless mexican emptying their loads in her pussy is out of character with the rest of the story.

Where did you disappear to??

Unlike the detractors and haters, I love your writing style. I don't know if you intended to leave this thread hanging or....? I would love to see what happens with the couple in the future, as I am certain others would also.

the low end

I would like to see your wife sucking off all old men would be real nice.
Think about it next time you write.
Men from the bottom end of the fish tank.

Would be hot!!! Gotta love it!!

Really enjoy your stories!

Intelligent interaction of emotions. And I like that they have real love and concern for each other!

Perfect Swing

Can't find any story better when it describes being drunk, erotic thoughts and chance of becoming a mom. This chapter deserves a five star rate, as did the previous chapter.

Loved it

Please finish the story!

REALLY???????

I read the whole thing in disgust! I kept hoping that somewhere along the way one or both of them would wise up, but NO....The character, John, is one screwed up asshole, so I suspect that you are too, writing this kind of bull shit! You are one fucked up asshole!!

Keep Going

Sure hope Henry gets a chance in her mouth

Awesome story

I read the entire thing! You did an awesome job with this story. It was very erotic. Thank you for writing it.
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