All Comments on 'Succulent and Serene'

other cultures have theirs also. TK U MLJ LV NV

Beautiful.. Thank you for sharing.

A reservoir of words and thought without losing self-possession.

I've lost count as to how many times I've read this poem; still counting.

I've discovered many layers of intrigue.

"He grants her freedom to sing." is just one of my favorites.

Your feedback is always appreciated.

Many entries coming soon.

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This speaks to something inside me, a voiceless and the voiced, a combination in harmony to fully actualize both...

I like this one even better than the last one!

I plan on editing this one, as there are a few lines left hanging; the byproduct of improvised verse (or music). The flow must flow.

About this line: Succulent syllables licked from/Her lips become dreams of infinity. It's so beautiful, I wish...really wish...someone felt that way about my words...

This is the best of the poems that I've read by you!

Five stars! Deserves more!