A wonderfully dirty 2nd chapter Mary, it made me very hard to read. Will there be a chapter 3? I do hope that there will.
I cant wait for more of Uncle Charles and Wendy AND Mrs Cane and Claire's marriage.
The stories are so clear and exciting they make my prick explode just talking about the titles.
These atre exceptional fantasy stories.
When you told me you were going to write about Wendy and her Mother, frankly, the idea didn't thrill me. It does now I've read it! I think you could make 'Wendy and her Daffodil' sexy! Very arousing indeed! Loved it...thanks
It's so nice to read a story where the action builds up, rather than a 'grab and fuck' story. Charles, Mum and Dad have a relationship which suits them all, and now Wendy is going to join them this story can only get better.
Well done Mary
Although I dislike incest stories, I must acknowledge they are the most exciting you could read. just wondered what could happen in a third chapter? In your case, the thrill surpasses by far the aversion
I enjoy all your stories, but I think so far the Uncle Charles are favourites. Well paced, interesting dynamics, definately arousing.
Incest isn't usually my thing, but you do it so well, I may be swayed.... lol...
That line,just then,is comedy gold. Very fine writing.I spotted a typo:
Suddenly my mother said "Wendy".....next line....:I knew He....should be She.
I wish Uncle liked it to be called his dick. It is crude, and I feel it's more "Uncle Charles"
And Wendy's wonderful "voice"...no one gets left behind
Wonderful writing and storytelling
Great sympathy shown to Henry.You have many fans MaryR.
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