All Comments on 'Uncle Charles Ch. 02'

by MaryR

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GrampervGrampervover 11 years ago
Delicious

A wonderfully dirty 2nd chapter Mary, it made me very hard to read. Will there be a chapter 3? I do hope that there will.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
I cant wait.

I cant wait for more of Uncle Charles and Wendy AND Mrs Cane and Claire's marriage.

The stories are so clear and exciting they make my prick explode just talking about the titles.

These atre exceptional fantasy stories.

josephstevensjosephstevensover 11 years ago
Agree!

When you told me you were going to write about Wendy and her Mother, frankly, the idea didn't thrill me. It does now I've read it! I think you could make 'Wendy and her Daffodil' sexy! Very arousing indeed! Loved it...thanks

JonnyfliesJonnyfliesover 11 years ago
Building up nicely

It's so nice to read a story where the action builds up, rather than a 'grab and fuck' story. Charles, Mum and Dad have a relationship which suits them all, and now Wendy is going to join them this story can only get better.

Well done Mary

dan57dan57over 11 years ago
More of the same

Although I dislike incest stories, I must acknowledge they are the most exciting you could read. just wondered what could happen in a third chapter? In your case, the thrill surpasses by far the aversion

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Creative and well written

I enjoy all your stories, but I think so far the Uncle Charles are favourites. Well paced, interesting dynamics, definately arousing.

WobieTideWobieTideabout 9 years ago
So Naughty.

Incest isn't usually my thing, but you do it so well, I may be swayed.... lol...

Nice story.

RegretsRegretsabout 7 years ago
And could I have a few biscuits as well

That line,just then,is comedy gold. Very fine writing.I spotted a typo:

Suddenly my mother said "Wendy".....next line....:I knew He....should be She.

I wish Uncle liked it to be called his dick. It is crude, and I feel it's more "Uncle Charles"

And Wendy's wonderful "voice"...no one gets left behind

Wonderful writing and storytelling

Great sympathy shown to Henry.You have many fans MaryR.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
Erotic

Your stories are beautifully erotic but always finish to soon.

You coul;d get more into each story - expand them

fantasyboyfantasyboyover 3 years ago
So arousing

You write very suggestively and it arouses me as i read it.

charliem100charliem1007 days ago

Great story. Might be better if her husband and father had normal size cocks. A woman doesn't need a small cock excuse to still want a big cock in her. I'd like to hear about both Uncle Charles and her father fucking her.

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