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Adam and Eve

bySenna Jawa©
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by Anonymous

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by LeBroz12/17/06

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Now that's a slightly different telling of the tale.

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by duddle14601/16/07

Another version.

Since none of us were there ~ it could have gone that way.

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by Amyfriend02/21/07

Very neat poem...

I wonder if the apple was a Macintosh or a PC. (Please excuse the blonde moment)

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by tigerjen02/01/11

I wouldn't call this poetry per se but I did enjoy what you were conveying, and if this form is what moves you, more power to you.

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