All Comments on 'Call Girl'

Interesting, a snapshot of life changing decisions in a flash story. I am not sure you really have enough length, enough verbiage to sell the states of mind completely? Maybe for Joe, but not for "Baby" because she never really seems to accept his need for her saying those magic words. She says them, but there is not enough thought about what they mean or don't mean to her. Sure, he is a favorite customer and gets a reduced rate, but still he is a customer and she only thinks of him that way. For that reason, her change of heart is too sudden, there is no process, no angst over a change in life style, assuming he wants her to give up the "Biz" as it were.