by GentWithHandcuffs
The first paragraph was great pulled me in, flowed well. Detailed imagery. The skin the bouse colour.
-Yes I liked it
Just Relished Over Your Story And Was Shamelessly Slurping Over Every Word...Well Deserving Of ***** That I Pinned On It..Also Now You’re A Marked Man As My Favourite Author And This Story Slides Into My Favourite Folder!!!
What More Can I Possibly Say Except That This Ain’t The Last Time I Read Your Story...Going To Be Lots Many Re-Reads Over And Over Again This Winter & Spring!!!