All Comments on 'Mistake?'

by Zrnko_Pisku

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mumblegooseeggmumblegooseeggover 11 years ago
Nice idea, well written

But a little on the short side, no? Didn't last long enough to give me a real hard-on. I could see a chapter 2 where this closeted gay feels compelled to make the advances himself.

uchenauchenaover 11 years ago
:)

You did a good job with this :) I agree with Mum there could definitely be more to this story. Are you intending more or to leave it as is?

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Older

An older gent cruising the public restroom at a remote roadside rest area followed me into the men's room. He bellied up to the urinal next to me and pulled out his flacid uncut cock, and just flopped it around with his hand but wasn't pissing. His eyes were locked on my pissing penis, when he said, "Nice cock!" I politely thanked him and asked what was so nice about my cock. He said, "everything...it's big, thick, cut, veiny and has a nice big suckable head." He asked if I cum a lot when I climax, and I said that I usually do. He said he wanted to see it hard to see how big it gets, so we ended up in his parked RV where he sucked me off with pleasure.

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