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by mumblegooseegg11/13/12

Nice idea, well written

But a little on the short side, no? Didn't last long enough to give me a real hard-on. I could see a chapter 2 where this closeted gay feels compelled to make the advances himself.

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by uchena11/13/12

:)

You did a good job with this :) I agree with Mum there could definitely be more to this story. Are you intending more or to leave it as is?

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