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With Sister's Help

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by Anonymous

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by Mark73711/12/12

Nice

I like it when writers don't give characters huge breasts or baseball bats for cocks. I've made that comment on other stories. You left it to our imagination. I enjoyed it. Nice twist going for anal first instead of regular sex. More?

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by Anonymous11/12/12

NIIIIIIICE!

I agree with mark737.
Love it when something happening while talking.
great story Well Done!

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by LAROC11/12/12

OH BOY !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! OH SISTER !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

WHAT I WOULD HAVE GIVEN TO HAVE HAD A SISTER LIKE HER WHEN I WAS YOUNGER. NICE STORY AS ALWAYS KEEP IT GOING. DOES HE GET THE GOOD GRADES, OR JUST GIVE UP. OR DOES SISTER STEP IN AND FUCK HIM TO A 4.O................................... ALWAYS A FAN................... LAROC OF AGES

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by Anonymous11/12/12

More ....

I sure hope there is a Ch.2 to this story because we need more and like your way of writing a very good story.!** Going now to check your Bio. and see what you have and what I have missed.! Great story and thanks.****

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by Anonymous11/13/12

Oh God sister. . . . . Help me with the studies

Agreed with Mark737 and Rockystone.

Great story which I truly enjoyed but it went a bit fast from handjob, blowjob to ass fuck. A bit more detail would be nice like how the elder sister would entice her younger brother in the studies perhaps signed a contractual agreement with him ? ;)

Overall, very well done !

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by istrionico11/13/12

Waiting for the next chapter!

I'm waiting for the next chapter: Lizzie said "It's a date", so I hope to read it! Can't wait to read an incest pussy creampie!

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by Anonymous11/13/12

love it

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by kc_sweetNsour11/14/12

wow!

Wow! Makes me want to tutor my brother!

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by Anonymous12/12/12

Loved It

Loved reading of the brother ass fucking his older sister.

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by Anonymous01/12/13

hot law students broken rules...

nice tutor sissyy..hot story

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by Anonymous01/12/13

good but

could have used more background and character buildup and deffinetly needs a second chapter. what happens after christmas? do the parents find out? do they keep fucking? does he move in with her?

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by Anonymous01/18/13

mother

needed mother to catch them and join them. I though that is what was going to happen.

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by Anonymous01/20/13

story contd.

story is great... i m waiting for next update

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by prop6902/05/13

Need more Chapters

Great story..Hope you will continue.

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by OLDED03/03/13

Don't stop now

There are so many ways you can take this story!.

ED

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by Oleguy04/08/13

Where from here ?

So many ways this story could go.
Sincerely hope it does go on.

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by BigPeteH06/29/13

6th time i've read this

I really hope you continue soon, it's sooooo hot

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by Anonymous08/01/13

Oh snap.

I like this sister! I wish I had an sister like that!
Love your work man, keep it up.

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by Anonymous11/10/13

Great sister

All sisters ought to be like this. I'd sure have loved to have had one like that.

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by Anonymous01/26/15

great read

wonderful story please keep writing i have read two of your story's so far and both where very well written i will keep reading them if they are all this good you might want to think about making a book one day just a thought i know i would buy it as i am sure there are a lot of others that would to

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by lonestar197503/22/15

great story

wonderful story i read it twice i hope you keep writing as i see one other person wrote if all your story's are like this one you may need to make a book if you ever do let me know i will get it great read

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by Anonymous07/09/15

nice work

i was so turned on at this. you write nicely.

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by Anonymous07/20/15

WOW

Excellent work again. !! THANK YOU VERY MUCH.

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by incst6110/21/15

So thrilling and so incestious

Quality of incest is so so good

Fear of getting cought and bro-sis relation seems real very good

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by Anonymous11/18/15

i jacked off TWICE!

made me cum twice

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by trigudis01/24/16

Terrific!

Hot AND Funny. That's not easy to pull off but you managed. Keep up the good work.

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by Anonymous01/24/16

Such a nice change

to read a story that isn't littered with spelling and grammatical errors.
I'm not really into anal sex, but in this case it was so well written that I quite liked it, and it was refreshing to see a story written in the first person, with a central character who doesn't boast about having an eight, nine, or ten inch cock.
Perhaps you could follow up by including Mom in a sub plot, so our hero can get some much needed cunt action from her, followed later by more ass action with Liz.
Well done. Very entertaining read.

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by HankWilliams195603/22/16

It's been a while since I've read a good brother/sister story like this one is, thanks for sharing.

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by Anonymous05/11/16

GREATISH

Only thing Why never have more chapters ?

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by Anonymous08/15/16

This is absolutely disgusting, how could anyone fuck their own sister, if this is what the world has come to then i am one happy man because it sounds like a great idea. 👌👈

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by Klrwb9908/25/16

You have a gift....

....keep writing please.

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by Anonymous08/30/16

Love your work

I normally don't comment, but I've finally read all your stories. You're a great writer, please keep it up. Especially the incest stories.

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by Anonymous11/22/16

escalation

I've read two of your other stories and like them, so continued with this one.

It feels like they escalate from just talking into doing just a bit too quickly.

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by Biguy4612/29/16

Incest

Love the story .keep going please.

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by blackknight31402/18/17

Very hot indeed.

He didn't get much studying done but he sure learned the ins and outs of his sisters little puckered asshole. Hmmm.

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