All Comments on 'The Party'

Is that it? Just drop the story like that? You submit a story about a guy answering an ad in a magazine. Why not wait until you write the rest of the story before wasting anyones time. This had the makings of a good story but you really dropped the ball.

I am amazed that the readers don't understand the art of presentation....patience, my readers, the story will unfold as I wish it to....and it's all written, by the way....I just don't want to present it all at once....

...in the hopes that your fully written tales begins to fulfill its promise with the next installment. Hopefully the outlandish setup is the only suspension of disbelief required.

I'll wait for next chapters

Not enought to comment on.