by SophieBell910
SophieBell very nice first story on Literotica. I enjoyed it and it excited me. Please use your imagination and create some more stories for us. xoxo Curious
Very good writing, you are a natural at this SophieBell! This one was short and you said it was your very first, well it was a very hot first story indeed. Got me nice and hot thinking about this scenario. Your Master is very lucky and should be very pleased with you. I'm sure we can only expect more great writings from you in the future. Well done.
- you most definitely ARE a writer of erotica - and a very good one, too. This, your first published story, was quite superb; I hope to read much more of your work - your Master permitting, of course - in the future.
Thank you for sharing a wonderful talent with us - five stars.
an erotica writer. This first story you wrote was fantastic. It had my pussy throbbing. I hope you continue with this so I know what happens. Please convey my thanks to your Master for allowing you to share this with us.
I do hope that this isn't your view of BDSM because the facets of the entire community is safe, sane, and consensual and this story doesn't convey any of that. I am not trying to be rude at all, but I really couldn't enjoy this story because it was wrong in such a big way. I'm sorry