All Comments on 'Unwanted Guest Ch. 01'

Nice story. Pls continue

German is your first language. Except for verb problems, you do quite well.

Can't wait to read about this young beauty succumbing to the nasty old bull!

thanks all for feedback.

hey good work dude. keep writing. ignore the comments by bitches :)

How fucking retarded is that? Garbage Pure and simple. You can delete this now you putz

Off course my dear friend please continue the story. I liked and bookmarked it.

Nobody got any authority to tell you what to do. Just concentrate on your writing

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Hot story, write more please - maybe make the next chapter longer though

Don't write any more u dumb fuck

please continue and don't bother about the comments of bitches

Looking good. Please post next part soon

Is it?

Even though you gave them warnings they still comment about the story and the unfaithful wife. I wish they would leave these kinds of stories alone. Good start keep it going.

fortunately short..

made comments around this .......... i've guess i'll do i've guess i'll make

- absolutely fantastic + absolutely spectacular & absolutely excellent ......

really sucks that you've stopped doing the stories .... i'll read what able

the2nd.the chapter the franchise - i'm going real soon extremely soon

"You made my dick mad!" is really one of the lines in this pitiful mess.

This is literally the worst story I have ever read on Literotica. Authors should wait to publish until they have at least finished junior high school. Spelling, grammar, vocabulary made this unreadable

More please