hey good work dude. keep writing. ignore the comments by bitches :)
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Anonymous11/15/12
You made my dick mad????
How fucking retarded is that? Garbage Pure and simple. You can delete this now you putz
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Anonymous11/15/12
continue
Off course my dear friend please continue the story. I liked and bookmarked it.
Nobody got any authority to tell you what to do. Just concentrate on your writing
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Anonymous11/16/12
More Please!
Hot story, write more please - maybe make the next chapter longer though
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Anonymous11/16/12
wow realy what a ducking joke
Don't write any more u dumb fuck
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Anonymous11/16/12
bitches will bark... keep writing
please continue and don't bother about the comments of bitches
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Anonymous11/16/12
what next
Looking good. Please post next part soon
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Anonymous11/17/12
English is not your first language?
Is it?
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Anonymous11/17/12
They don't listen...
Even though you gave them warnings they still comment about the story and the unfaithful wife. I wish they would leave these kinds of stories alone. Good start keep it going.
made comments around this .......... i've guess i'll do i've guess i'll make
- absolutely fantastic + absolutely spectacular & absolutely excellent ......
really sucks that you've stopped doing the stories .... i'll read what able
the2nd.the chapter the franchise - i'm going real soon extremely soon
English
nice start
Nice story. Pls continue
I'm Guessing
German is your first language. Except for verb problems, you do quite well.
What a great start!
Can't wait to read about this young beauty succumbing to the nasty old bull!
thanks
thanks all for feedback.
thanks for sharing
hey good work dude. keep writing. ignore the comments by bitches :)
You made my dick mad????
How fucking retarded is that? Garbage Pure and simple. You can delete this now you putz
continue
Off course my dear friend please continue the story. I liked and bookmarked it.
Nobody got any authority to tell you what to do. Just concentrate on your writing
.
More Please!
Hot story, write more please - maybe make the next chapter longer though
wow realy what a ducking joke
Don't write any more u dumb fuck
bitches will bark... keep writing
please continue and don't bother about the comments of bitches
what next
Looking good. Please post next part soon
English is not your first language?
Is it?
They don't listen...
Even though you gave them warnings they still comment about the story and the unfaithful wife. I wish they would leave these kinds of stories alone. Good start keep it going.
Unpleasant but ...
fortunately short..
can't believe that nobody:
made comments around this .......... i've guess i'll do i've guess i'll make
- absolutely fantastic + absolutely spectacular & absolutely excellent ......
really sucks that you've stopped doing the stories .... i'll read what able
the2nd.the chapter the franchise - i'm going real soon extremely soon
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