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by LeBroz12/16/06

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Powerful images that bring to mind street life in the city.
I think this has perhaps the most words I've noticed in one of your poems.

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by duddle14601/03/07

Hustle Bustle

As one who loves the big cities and their beautiful way of life ~ I found this poem very reminiscent and evocative. Lovely trip down memory lane.

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