All Comments on 'Mastering Submission Ch. 23'

This has been quite a ride, sdbnnc! Sometimes a little bumpy and harsh, it never faltered in sheer eroticism and was impossible to ignore - your attention to this text, your dedication to bringing us this new POV have never wavered.

This is, without the slightest doubt, one of the most thrilling and downright sexy stories I have ever had the pleasure of reading - thank you for all your hard work.

I imagine you will be taking a rest for a while before starting on a new story for us and you have earned every minute of it. Five stars seems a paltry award for such a marvellous piece of erotica, but have them with my compliments!

te

I'm glad you finished it! It was terrific.I like happy endings.

I don’t think I’ve ever read a story such as this that captivated me from chapter one and on. Absolutely beautiful work.

Loved, loved, loved this.

Great mix of twisted & beautiful.