All Comments on 'Mustang Cindy'

Cindy should have a follow up where she encounters

the accomplice and he shows Cindy the video of her and Brad's encounter.

There's a construct which is totally improper as its one or the other not both, the !". at the end of a sentence. Pick which one and forget the other.

Very nice with a great story line. Very well written and the writing described the imagery perfectly. Keep up the good work..IT reminds me of the writing of one of my favorite writers in Literotica

Thanks for the comments so far.

I appreciate the comments about the imagery and the high praise, thanks gemman1. It's my first submission, sort of a challenge from a friend, so I was really trying to create something with strong imagery, something I feel that she will enjoy reading.

I've mucked up some of the syntax around quotes, and know that can be distracting. I plan to tweak those shortly. Thanks all!

Revised and hotter than before!