What a delightful story, although I should say what a delightful love!
and keep sinning Cinner. For you know what love is and how it should be.
Two Talons up!
with several caveats of wisdom, TK U MLJ LV NV
this story hits real close to home and personal family. Good Job putting it together. LKH TK U MLJ LV NV
I teared up at the end when he gave his speech. Your character showed true love and found what is important....Family.
Loved it. As an old guy, I like the way she writes about love and meaning and relationships. Good work!
The response to this story has been absolutely overwhelming! It's the best that I've done in a single day since Soren and his Sisters came out; but this is proving to be far more positive!
What a lovely love story with a Christmas theme. Thanks for sharing.
From an old fart who has been lucky enough to spend a good retirement with the girl he married many years ago, thanks for a great read.
I really hope thats there is a chapter 2 to this story
Good job. It both read well and had a lot of emotion to bring to the table. Good job.
Fun story - keep it up.
Bill -- in Texas
Lovely story, babes..
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