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Passing at Christmas

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous11/12/12

Very Amusing

Very clever twist, but what else should we expect from habu. Good Luck.

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by lonesomedove6611/12/12

That was so funny

I thought it was a very funny story and I loved the ending Great writing as ever

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by Anonymous11/13/12

HaHaHa

Good for Edwin.

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by nomoretears0011/14/12

LOL

Good one, Pilot! :)

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by NekoParks11/28/12

I always love

a soupcon of literary pretention with my smut! Naughty, naughty to use Mr. Donne this way. Of course, he was a randy s.o.b. before he found religion...

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by NENE0312/02/12

Corny!

I love corny romance, this story was very cute!

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by filovebug05/23/14

Fun story, just one correction

At the part on this page after the asterisks, it should say that Edwin was kissing REGINALD's lips, not Edwin's lips.

But this was a lot of fun to read. I wish there was more to it.

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by TimothyM01/02/15

The tricker tricked

I liked how the servant conned his master, quite sweetly and to both their pleasure.

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by joshprim12/12/16

Loved the First Part

I loved the first tale in this story about the deflowering of young Percy. Sheer brilliance by the author but didn't care for the remaining portions of the story, although I finally understand the meaning of the tile, which I didn't until I read the rest of the story which I normally don't do.
I wish the author had continued on with more deflowering stories which I find extremely erotic.
Also, considering the era in which the story seems to take place, I thought the use of condoms was unnecessary and detracted from the eroticism.

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