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by Anonymous11/15/12

All these stories and...

You still identify everyone by race, religion or country of origin. You've never used a quotation mark or written proper dialog, just long paragraphs of narrative.

FIRST--Get mental health counseling.
SECOND--Attend writing workshops and learn to write.

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