My Second Prom

Fucking hot!

Loved every bit of it. The build-up to the denouement - everything was exciting. I wish I had a hot older cousin like the girl in this story who would have given me a similar prom experience. Looking forward to future stories!

Meh

Must either be very true or very not. Too many bumps in such a short story providing turn-offs. I.e. I'm so proud of my fit cheerleader body I dumped surgery into making it "better", I'm into black guys even though it has no relevance, things like that. It's not bad for a one-pager, but I think editing can make it 10 times better.

Very entertaining... lol I laugh when I read dumb ass comments from people trying to edit stories tho... get a brain fool.... lol otherwise good story :-) reminds me of me and my cousin

hot

I simply will say I found it very hot and funny both. More of your life experiences to come?

its one thing to fuck your family ,but to bring in your friends when you think they are past out drunk makes you a rapist.

I don't know if this was 'real' but it read 'real' !

Taking 200 dollars from cousin to be his prom date ? Im not hating. He got his money's worth. I wish this had happened to me with my hot female cousins. They were hard core party girls, but none into diet or exercise.

A few decades have passed & suffice to say, my fantasies have moved on. This story replicates quite well a variation of how I wish things had gone at that time. Thank you.

Good Start

Keep writing, your story is good. But have your work looked at by an editor, there was some misspelled words, trust me I know, but its very hard to find someone to edit your material. Keep it coming I enjoyed it very much.

not hot just ugly

real ugly picture on the bio page and the story wasn't any better real ugly also.

Encoure!

Any chance we can get a sequel to this? It was great!

Five stars

Very hot can't wait to read some more of your stories