Quit reading at the remark of "BIG TITS" and I would bet on farther down he has a 10" for her.!
You writers need to get real.!
Go write over on Dolly and John H's site!!
You got a big "1"... as that is what you deserve.*
I like how you can judge someone's writing yet post your comments as "anonymous" . That takes a lot of balls to judge when there is no way of me judging your writing. Next time you want to insult someone and there writing put yourself out there to be judged yourself. Last time I checked this was for fun not like we're getting put on the shelves at a Barnes and nobles.
I think we're all here because we enjoy reading erotica, a spectrum that ranges from porn to literature. Writing takes time and patience and practice, but everyone has a right to express themselves and share. If you don't like certain categories - don't read stories from them and then post hateful comments. If you aren't impressed with someone's writing, try posting some constructive criticism rather than bashing someone for having the courage to share their thoughts with so many people and leave themselves open for criticism.
If you don't like something, it is your right to vote and your right to send feedback to the author, but is it necessary to be hateful?
I think this story is a good start. The passion is there. Don't be discouraged by useless comments and keep on writing...you can only improve with time. Great start!
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Quit reading at the remark of "BIG TITS" and I would bet on farther down he has a 10" for her.!
You writers need to get real.!
Go write over on Dolly and John H's site!!
You got a big "1"... as that is what you deserve.*
Ok?
I like how you can judge someone's writing yet post your comments as "anonymous" . That takes a lot of balls to judge when there is no way of me judging your writing. Next time you want to insult someone and there writing put yourself out there to be judged yourself. Last time I checked this was for fun not like we're getting put on the shelves at a Barnes and nobles.
NO MATTER THE CAVEATS
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Constructive criticism vs. bashing
I think we're all here because we enjoy reading erotica, a spectrum that ranges from porn to literature. Writing takes time and patience and practice, but everyone has a right to express themselves and share. If you don't like certain categories - don't read stories from them and then post hateful comments. If you aren't impressed with someone's writing, try posting some constructive criticism rather than bashing someone for having the courage to share their thoughts with so many people and leave themselves open for criticism.
If you don't like something, it is your right to vote and your right to send feedback to the author, but is it necessary to be hateful?
I think this story is a good start. The passion is there. Don't be discouraged by useless comments and keep on writing...you can only improve with time. Great start!
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