Great story, I don't often give five stars or even leave comments on some of the stories, but this was a fun story to read, I like a little more build up to sex, but with the way the story was written it wasn't called for.
Looking forward to chapter two.
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Anonymous11/24/12
Part 3
You should write a 3rd chapter where the couples sleep nude and the house gets broken into by a gang of 6 or 8 guys who really help the guys "educate" the girls.
I know it's a fantasy story , but so many virgins and not a drop of virgin blood running down their inner thighs or at least some cum leaking from their pussys? I believe little, but essential, details like that can better a story, make it hotter, and should not be left out.
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Great story
Great story, I don't often give five stars or even leave comments on some of the stories, but this was a fun story to read, I like a little more build up to sex, but with the way the story was written it wasn't called for.
Looking forward to chapter two.
Part 3
You should write a 3rd chapter where the couples sleep nude and the house gets broken into by a gang of 6 or 8 guys who really help the guys "educate" the girls.
Keep on writing, but...
I know it's a fantasy story , but so many virgins and not a drop of virgin blood running down their inner thighs or at least some cum leaking from their pussys? I believe little, but essential, details like that can better a story, make it hotter, and should not be left out.
Great Games
Very good, interested and believable, liked the games and looking forward to part 2
lov it!!!
i love these games!!! definatly 5*!!!
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