Native American Nympho Stoner Ch. 01

Slow start, better finish

I realize you are trying to provide much detail, but seems it went over the line into too much detail. "slightly over 4.5 years older" about turned me off from what was a good finish.

Thanks!

Thanks for the constructive comment; you made a good point and I'll keep that in mind when writing future chapters! I just submitted chapter two this morning and am now almost done writing chapter three!

Total Disrespect of Native Americans!

Total Disrespect of Native Americans!

Gee a complaint about the story not being PC!

I wonder if the commenter actually read the story. I find the story and the characters fairly well done but will have to read more. Being part Native American I understand the way some will fill, but I have not found anything to complain about yet other then the title

Very beautiful. Makes me want to find a Butch myself.

Wrong category

This story is well written but in the wrong category. Traditionally, Romances at Literotica are much softer, where the story is much more of an Erotic Coupling type thing, with the "fucksticks" and casual sex. Just a suggestion, since I read the latest chapter and thought that was also in the wrong category. Like I said, the story itself it fine. The PC complaints are baseless.