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well done!
very well written! i am impressed that it is your 1st story and am really looking forward to the next chapter. 5 stars:)
Amazing
Well written ! I love this already, I can't wait for the next installment.
Fantastic first attempt
I have read your first attempt with great interest and look forward to more of the same. Can't wait for him to find his mate now!!
More
Can't wait to read the next chapter and see how the story unfolds as Jackson searches for his mate.
yay
great start to this story im really likeing it so far........cant wait for the next chapter
great job
I'm very impressed. I was drawn into the story from the beginning and I'm looking forward to reading the next installment of this story... great job and keep it coming...
Good start!!! More please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Good start.
Keep going!
An Ebony Alpha.............. can't wait for the next instament. Good start. Keep writing.
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