by newjayne
What a nice story...almost a documentary! Well written and interesting as well as being erotic....sound like 'real' people at play...I do like the 'divide by 2 and add 1' rule! Very funny.....
It sounds as if might well be based on personal experience?
Very good. The characters rung true, plausible plot, good humor, what;s not to like? I gave it a 5*
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You have a way with words that is very pleasing to my eyes. Thank you for a very enjoyable read looking forward to your next submission.
and all wrapped up in a really entertaining story. Now that's what I call first-class writing!