so sexy.....just the type of story you want to her after waiting on her for hours. so sexy.........not
Except for the "ponding". Thanks. 4*
She fucks around you, love doing it.
Comes home show no love, no respect, no consideration for you
and this turns you on, wonderful
You might want to alert the reader that hubby has wife sharing or watching fantasies in an early part of the story because by his showing anger at her late arrival we infer that hubby is normal and does not want to share his wife and would not react well to learning she has cheated or at least came close to it.
WTF is wrong with you??/
No woman would treat me like that and live with me.
She has proven she doesnt respect her husband and is a liar.
You complainers who don't like fantasy, or even better, an exciting wife can get a free copy of the Bible at many churches. I give it 5 stars.
Not sure what happened here. Not sure if she cheated. Not sure if the couple is into fantasies and Not sure why she put on tights..
time for a cool change and quickly. TK U MLJ LV NV
Did she? Or was it just made up?
So far so good - but I really do hope you revisit and give us a little more in a new episode. Well written.
That's an insult to the really good writers who actually tell a story worth reading. It takes all kinds of readers I guess. This is a want to be cuck story worth at best 3* for effort.
The Briar Rose on Bennetts Hill? Was that where Daryl had his hotel room?
Blimey! A story set in my home town!
Interesting first story. Keep writing!
Of course she did!
What sucks is that she didn't once take his phone calls and only once texted him back with an excuse about taxis'
If she wasn't drunk, I'll bet she would not have told him a thing,said she had fun and he was a jerk for giving her a hard time.
Leave a note and your ring on the kitchen table and try to find someone real to enjoy Christmas with.
I would suggest a second chapter except that we all kind of realized you get off on submissive wimps, cucks! Atta boy Girl!
Thanks for sharing.
Don't write another chapter. His cuckold excitement was enough already.
Go away and stay there.
His problem is he is too gentle wih her.
Perhaps he should just rough her up a little while she is at home drunk, and then fuck her up the arse.
Show her she is nothing but a cheating slut,and he is going to treat her like one from now on.
Don't mind the haters comments, they do that to EVERY story there is in Loving Wives that really belongs in Loving Wives.
They are merely trolls that gained some clout here surprisingly over the years.
I for one liked your story despite the holes. The main one being the 8 missing hrs. Then the conflict between the story starting with the studs in the hotel room and Daryl.
Then the nonchalant attitude the wife was having over his being angry.
And then, sigh, you left us hanging as to if she has cheated or not.
Sigh maybe you deserve 3 out 5 stars.
Not loving wives. Post it in fetish so the real cuckold lovers will see it.
If I see it it gets 1*. And fuck off with your 'hater' crap.
By saying "fuck off with your 'hater' crap" you proved yourself to be a hater. I ask you why you bothered by my comment if you are not a hater? Am I hitting you too close to home?
And this story is what Loving Wives is really about. It belongs here.
Fetish is a completely different animal in itself. If you understood that category then you would know. Obviously you know nothing about sex. Ooops sorry - should not have said that for I am stooping to your level.
I hate cheating slut skank cunt low-life wives. All should live in extreme pain.
What a load of crap. Man up stop being a cuckold or a wimp. Fuck her by treating her like a slut even make her give a blow job, deep throat or/and fuck her ass. Treat her shit even swear at her or call her a slut. Kick out of the room, move her another room or kick her out of the house. Divorce the cheating slut and get yourself a new girlfriend or wife who treat you good. Get a fuck buddy or make yourself a harem.
he's a Brit, explains the whole story.
Notice our writer gave up...too bad, he had a chance to write another chapter. He did have a little ability to keep our interest so, might have been a good read.
As to wife, she fucked Daryl, pure and simple and obviously, it didn't bother her one ioda when it came to going home and dealing with hubby who...she could easily, and did, order around.
She likes her new job and everything it offers!!!!
This writer does have some talent and shouldn't have given up. It would have been interesting to see if a second chapter or additional stories would show him to be a submissive cuck...too bad he quit, I would have given him a few chapters!
...I guess Leisuretime likes a late cumbath..
Could write English.
So much for that theory.
Not all of them of course, but some of them must be an embarrassment to those with any intelligence. No imagination and no sense of humor. It's a problem isn't it?
Anyway Leisuretime, a good thought provoking story ('They' wouldn't understand) Five stars for the hell of it. Well done. I enjoyed it.
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