Short, sweet, to the point. Enough back story to start, then right into the heat. Crisp and real dialogue, kinky and dirty sex. Well done
I enjoyed the read ... very nice tale. Wonder what you'll introduce to her next?
First part absolutely brilliant - Wonderful dialog. - So authentic! And as this charming little story picked up momentum, I swear I heard Audrey II in the background. A one plant chorus. Really! A visit to the Little Shop will never be quite the same.
Thank you! Excellent story. Nice build up. Makes me wish I had a more adventuresome partner who would do this with me. Keep up the excellent stories!
Next time my wife asks what I want for dinner, I'm going to tell her.
My dictionary defines pornography as stories, pictures or films intended to arouse sexual excitement
Fits this authors work to a T and I'm sorry it took me so long to discover him and his great cock-raising stories.
anything that happens between a husband and wife is ok as long as they
are not hurt and want it to happen. I would not be ok with
other people being in on this. just the two of them.
I liked it. Having a couple who gradually stop communicating and stop making love probably isn't that unusual.
I like the way this story went, very realistic in the way the husband wouldn't make decisions, sounds right on. The way they broke the bonds of silence and finally got it on is great.
Well written sex scenes. Very erotic. Good read.
What an excellent story... left me hungry for the same experience!
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