what a crock of shit do you believe in ghosts
... short and sweet.
Be retrieving his cock and balls and her tits from a garbage grinder prior to their demise. You spend 30 years on death row whilst titless and dickless do there thing. XOXOXOXOXO
who wrote this is just plain evil.
You seem to have a way of bringing out emotions, good, bad and in between. Not quite sure of how to react to your ending, but keep on truckin'.
and going out with a clean conscience, TK U MLJ LV NV
What's scary is that it has probably happened to some poor loser, and he died for someone else's crime.
The part I do NOT understand is why the warden would kill a great piece of ass who wanted future repeats. It would have been more consistent if Hubby really DID 'do in' his Sweetie and best friend, so he WAS righteously convicted and sentenced but for crimes he committed due to a misunderstanding! Rather than dying innocent, he finally knows he REALLY screwed up!
I think it is too dark to rate, except in Erotic Horror!
It is highly unlikely. First, why did he kill the wife and if they were acquainted then there would be so evidence. Plus, the usual length of time on death row would be 35 yrs leaving me wondering how long has he had a job there especially if he was familiar with the wife as a colleague.
Finally, why did the husband think it was the best friend? What evidence existed to support his belief that didn't convince the police?
make it a bit difficult for writers to respond directly. I wanted to correct some of the information in the comment. In Texas the average time on death row since reinstatement of the death penalty in 1973 has been 10.6 years. The two shortest lengths of time were 252 days for Joe Gonzales in 1996 and 263 days for Steven Renfro in 1998. These time frames are well within the realm of the story.
As for motive and the other questions I leave it to the reader to read and think about it.
A little unreal. Interesting read though. You can do better, however.
excluding the end, it's really fucking hot
Who the fuck is talking?
The priest? The warden?
Why will he shake his head that he has nothing to say?
If he didn't kill the cheating cunt and his friend who did?
This isn't a story. It's a few paragraphs of unanswered questions.
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