Can't wait to read about Betty when she gets the old stud's monster. I know she'll absolutely love it!
Have him removed. If she lets in now she deserves to be divorced and thrown away.
Once you allow a man to take advantage of you and do that you might as well divorce cause you have no respect for yourself so how can you respect your marriage.
Regardless of who the individual is.
If this man did that to me while my husband was away i would have shot him in the nuts.
I realy didn't think it could get any worse after the first one - but you managed it!
Thanks for your shity comment again. You too managed quite well. Well keep barking like a dog i don't care about dogs
When they see dogshit like this thats how people react. How old are you 12? Not only is the storyline lousy it is written like a elementary schooler. Badger was right this is worse than the first one
on the name of feedback some readers are really behaving like a dogs. author is right to call such people dogs. they indeed are dogs for they don't know what constructive criticism means. only human can provide such criticism not dogs who can't understand human language can just bark. what a waste of time to talk about such people. i will request the author to ignore such animals and continue the story.
let the dog bark for it knew only that much
here arë amazingly infantile. It's inconceivable that people would want to read ch.2 if they hated ch.1. That's masochism.
The story is very hot. More please, and soon!
We can all see where this might be going, but you are drawing it out slowly. Great technique. I can't wait for the next installment!
love the story line, tired of cockold stories, husbands watching etc. please continue the story to the end and then some.
Not complement. " realized how much wet her panty had become." Sounds like english is your second language. Is it? That would be a good excuse.
I like how this story is going. Awaiting the rest of the story
the start of the story is great, love the build-up. he comes on but just enough to get her wanting more. Ses reluctant but cant help being more and more curious....
Wow! Keep the chapters coming!!
Why don't you you goto Barnes and borders and pick up a story their so you can rede a novvel that have been edittted six times wit all da errors a gramar and punk chuation correctd and leave da authors alone.
Btw: can you count the number mistakes I made with my comments above!
GET A LIFE!
Some of the fucking retards they allow on this site.
Im slowing stroking imagining her little pussy astride her father in laws huge peter.
made comments around the2nd.the chapter the franchise ..........
wellllllllllllllllllllllllllllllll i'll make the comment HERE's1st.offHERE's i've didn't
read everything I'VE DID literally read least1/2thisleast ........ again now -
really sucks that you stopped stories ...... i'll read what didn't when able ....
i'm now gonna read least tad the3rd.the chapter the franchise prior going
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