what happen if hubby wants another woman.
By any name is still a whore pig
wizard who has to write.
i would have kicked both their asses and told her to pack her bags.
She didnt scream rape so she was willing.
Apply rape charges or sign divorce papers would be her only choices. No exceptions.
Hopefully the slut bitch whore gets AIDs and dies in terrible agony.
for your arrogant disclaimer.
I enjoyed it.
It is amazing how much emotional prattle a work of fiction can generate from some readers.
With her sidekick WACC.
This was just her way of tell him that from now on he at best gets cleanup duty.
Notice no real sign of remorse or concern for hubby.
No we should get you some now.
but what if next time its FFFM....will she go for that one, TK U MLJ LV NV
Well, to be honest, not at all. Sorry, but it just didn't work - at all. I'm sure you can do better because you can write.
and steve, she has the fun and he ...whatevers? Perhaps just leave her on the
beach for ken, whomever, and go on w/o her.An end for her is merely a new beginning as a ...whatever she calls herself
and the writer can take a fucking hike and not come back.
What a pile of rubbish! 1*
Seems like Emily owes her husband a few free passes with some other hot sluts. If not then he should dump the whore. Or he could just say," gee honey I thought it was your cunt and lips wrapped around my cock not those two other sluts it was just a silly mistake."
the comments from the idiots who are too stupid to comprehend that they don't have to read what they don't enjoy. They're all closet fags who are ashamed because they end up jerking off over these stories.
There are a LOT of different aspects in which the reader is asked to suspend disbelief. 1) Falling asleep in the Hawaiian sun as a Caucasian vacationer leaves a girl with MORE than a sore pussy. Especially a blond who does NOT already tan in the nude! 2) A woman finding herself 'covered' by a stranger stays essentially silent and (relatively) inactive! Libido is a fairly fragile 'organ' and that degree of shock and surprise would overwhelm unless she was in the middle of climax (maybe)! 3) Hubby would calmly and silently walk up to the 'crowd' (three's a crowd) where his wife may be getting raped? Even though Sweetie is 'superior' at that point does NOT mean it can't be rape! 4) neither Ken NOR James gives Sweetie a name and hotel for subsequent gang-bangs? (Corollary: Sweetie doesn't give either the longest dick or the thickest dick she has EVER pleasured HER name and hotel?)
Once we accept all these areas under suspicion, it is NOT a bad anecdote...it is plenty hot enough, and the writing (as previously commended by the Beav) is competent.
Tazz - I would suggest Hubby would NOT survive an FFFM - unless Sweetie licked a couple of the "F's" for him!
4*. Probably shoulda been 3, but the trolls ganged up!
seems like most of the american women are sluts and men are pathetic cucks. truly pathetic
This was mildly interesting. I think these anonymous people are just commenting to try to make them selves feel less happy despite they probably read this story and was aroused. This husband was obviously aroused by his wives encounter and obvious understood the situation of mistaken identification until the penetrations.
Of course I think the whole perspective changing was a bit harsh. I can understand two points of views, but four simultaneously going on and the fact each experience is replayed between four people is quite....redundant and make reading complicated and granted it helps to make a surround viewing of the situation a simple two person perspective or maybe even just one person perspective would suffice during this.
It would of really been nice to read her slow break down to the fact she's receiving more than she typically gets and it really a turn on.
Also I feel this isn't cheating. This is a couple experience for which these two will become a mingling sharing couple who swing and stuff like that
Too the others, these stories are about Married extra-marital fun: swinging, sharing & more. Note the more.
Great job John.
I got lost and gave up
I'd rather click on here and vote 1*.
This is a purely entertaining read, with just enough eroticism, and that's enough for me. If I have a criticism, is that maybe it could be longer...more detailed and whatnot...but that just means I wanted more of what you're selling here. Good job.
the reason for the hate is that marriage is meant to be exclusive and just using that sacred vow for just erotica sucks. At least have the husband either get mad or get his own pair of women.
Just wants to suck a dick
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