Carol's Christmas

Really Amazing Stuff

The story is just amazing and sexually very hot. A sequel is desperately needed Beth!

NOT a loving husband..a deranged husband.

Plain out sick. And, "hot" as ice skating in hell.

MARCUS..........long and hard

turned and pucnhed the bitch in her face, TK U MLJ LV NV p/s that could be one ending.....mlj

Tazz

I am sure I am not alone in anxiously anticipating your debut as an author. I'm sure your stories will be really creepy since you seem to think hitting women is a great plot bunny, but hey creepy works for some readers, apparently especially to old men such as yourself.

That is a nasty comment by Tazz.

What a vile obsessive character he appears to be. But obviously ill. I'm afraid we must bear him.

Wrong category in my opinion.

I feel this should have been in Gay male or BDSM. I did not enjoy it and would not have read it if it was properly labeled. If I had not read it, I would not have given it a three. I do think Tazz was a bit over the edge.

Hot, love the anal sex

Great story. Love how she drills his ass, followed by men tapping him, too. More action with her in leather and thigh-high boots would be even better.

first time?

after a few times with the priests and nuns, this is nice

Great story i am looking forward to the next chapter.

part two in progress

I will submit the second part of this as BDSM as I think that's probably a more proper category for it.

Interesting

Not being into the sub master stories, it was still intersting - with a rather nice surprise ending. - Rugrat60

Inconsistency right off the top

ruined it for me.

Just how is Marc a special gift if Carol is already a slut wife being used as soldiers' leave present? Forced me out of the context I had created for the story and could not enjoy it from then on. Sorry.

re: Sirhugs

I'm sorry you were unable to wrap your head around how a male virgin would be a special gift just based upon his virginity. Then again, I also don't understand how anyone could be turned on by their relatives, so....

Like that would happen.

A young man, virgin or not, full of youthful testosterone just wouldn't do those things. Too much male ego. Too much implausibility makes this story rubbish.