The story is just amazing and sexually very hot. A sequel is desperately needed Beth!
Plain out sick. And, "hot" as ice skating in hell.
turned and pucnhed the bitch in her face, TK U MLJ LV NV p/s that could be one ending.....mlj
I am sure I am not alone in anxiously anticipating your debut as an author. I'm sure your stories will be really creepy since you seem to think hitting women is a great plot bunny, but hey creepy works for some readers, apparently especially to old men such as yourself.
What a vile obsessive character he appears to be. But obviously ill. I'm afraid we must bear him.
I feel this should have been in Gay male or BDSM. I did not enjoy it and would not have read it if it was properly labeled. If I had not read it, I would not have given it a three. I do think Tazz was a bit over the edge.
Great story. Love how she drills his ass, followed by men tapping him, too. More action with her in leather and thigh-high boots would be even better.
after a few times with the priests and nuns, this is nice
Great story i am looking forward to the next chapter.
I will submit the second part of this as BDSM as I think that's probably a more proper category for it.
Not being into the sub master stories, it was still intersting - with a rather nice surprise ending. - Rugrat60
ruined it for me.
Just how is Marc a special gift if Carol is already a slut wife being used as soldiers' leave present? Forced me out of the context I had created for the story and could not enjoy it from then on. Sorry.
I'm sorry you were unable to wrap your head around how a male virgin would be a special gift just based upon his virginity. Then again, I also don't understand how anyone could be turned on by their relatives, so....
A young man, virgin or not, full of youthful testosterone just wouldn't do those things. Too much male ego. Too much implausibility makes this story rubbish.
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