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A Daughter's Love

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous11/17/12

Not fantasex.

I'm sorry you didn't like it. The other chapters are being reviewed. This first part is a setup for the rest of it.

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by nomennescio11/18/12

I was going to say that Francine's shifts in mood seemed to be a little too extreme to be credible - going from "Tears poured down Francine's face. She trembled uncontrollably. " to "Francine leaned forward. There was a strange gleam in her eyes. A gleam she didn't trust." in the space of a few sentences. That it's all an act does serve to explain this, of course, though it then becomes a little odd that Elise would not find her mood swings to be suspicious.

Anyway, that's just something of a quibble that struck me as I was reading it. The story certainly has potential; I'll be looking out for the rest as it arrives.

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by Anonymous11/18/12

It wasn't bad. The person who left that rude comment was probably drunk... lol

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by Anonymous11/21/12

Enjoyable, but...

I would have preferred reading about Elise. ;)

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by Morarose11/23/12

definitely piqued my interest

Wild lead in to the tale.

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by Anonymous02/05/14

hmmm

I so wanna fuck my daughter..

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