You write well, Elizabethhart.
I really like the characters. They make sense and are consistent. Not to mention, this chapter was hott! Love it! Please continue.
You have a gift for describing erotically ;-)
I like the fact that the father didn't act like a total dick head n fucked her in the limo again unlike most stories that portray fathers as a sex craze for their daughters n saw nothing wrong with it......hope they fall in love though ;)
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You write well, Elizabethhart.
Enjoying this series very much!
I really like the characters. They make sense and are consistent. Not to mention, this chapter was hott! Love it! Please continue.
You have a gift for describing erotically ;-)
Awesome
I like the fact that the father didn't act like a total dick head n fucked her in the limo again unlike most stories that portray fathers as a sex craze for their daughters n saw nothing wrong with it......hope they fall in love though ;)
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