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Anonymousover 11 years agoEnjoying the story so far. You should get someone to proof read these before posting though. And correct where you have used the name Microsoft with Microprose.
Tastee323over 11 years agoLove It!
Great story. Where does she go from here? I think she meant to use Microsoft as the competition. Good Job!
Anonymousover 11 years agoSuperb!
The sexual tension is so smoking hot! Your writing is excellent! Please keep writing!
aAmour1964over 7 years agoAmazing
Enjoying the story so far.. The narrative depicts fantasy and that's sweet!
ToughSailor5 months agoI love the revenge aspect so far. You still need a good proof reader though . . . .
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