Enjoying the story so far. You should get someone to proof read these before posting though. And correct where you have used the name Microsoft with Microprose.
Great story. Where does she go from here? I think she meant to use Microsoft as the competition. Good Job!
The sexual tension is so smoking hot! Your writing is excellent! Please keep writing!
Enjoying the story so far.. The narrative depicts fantasy and that's sweet!
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Enjoying the story so far. You should get someone to proof read these before posting though. And correct where you have used the name Microsoft with Microprose.
Love It!
Great story. Where does she go from here? I think she meant to use Microsoft as the competition. Good Job!
Superb!
The sexual tension is so smoking hot! Your writing is excellent! Please keep writing!
Amazing
Enjoying the story so far.. The narrative depicts fantasy and that's sweet!
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