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A Daughter's Love Ch. 05

byElizabethhart©
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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous11/21/12

Enjoying the story so far. You should get someone to proof read these before posting though. And correct where you have used the name Microsoft with Microprose.

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by Tastee32311/21/12

Love It!

Great story. Where does she go from here? I think she meant to use Microsoft as the competition. Good Job!

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by Anonymous11/23/12

Superb!

The sexual tension is so smoking hot! Your writing is excellent! Please keep writing!

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by aAmour196410/07/16

Amazing

Enjoying the story so far.. The narrative depicts fantasy and that's sweet!

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