I think every girl has had the fantasy about her daddy; you just made me wish I had made mine a reality! SUPER HOT!
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Anonymous11/24/12
keep going!!!!
I love this series so much. I think you should have the daughter get pregnant next and see how you can develop more into the new relationship between her and her dad. I would personally like to see the Culvers go down but you are the author so you know best.
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Anonymous11/24/12
OMG!!!!
You're my father and my Alec, that dialogue gave me the shivers. Your characters are so real, and the erotism is so freaking hot! I am enjoying this story so much. Please keep writing.
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Anonymous11/24/12
hrmm....
like others, I struggled through the first 4~ chapters, after that, I didnt touch it until I saw this one pop up, read 5-8 until I got to this:
""I know I'm right." Culver said. "He'll use her for our purposes and then leave her. All this was just for show. We'll get our way. We always do.""
After that portion, I couldn't actually read the rest, I literally had to skim through to the end, and I think the following chapters are going to be much of the same skimming until the Culver's get what should RIGHTFULLY be coming to them, and no, I dont mean for the incest part of it, I mean for the downright evil people they really show themselves to be in the story, they need to be punished, and the rest of the board members who are obliviously also pawns in his scheme need redemption, maybe Culver gets a hand up on Alec and they come in to save the say or tip the scales....
Either way, this story is at the tipping point, from being another downhill into oblivion story of pointless'ness.
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Anonymous11/25/12
Oh God
You made it seem so real so alive. Alec and Elise are great keep writing. I wish I had a relationship like theirs with my dad.
im sitting on the edge of my seat the more i read.. I wake up in the mornings looking to see if the next chapter has been posted!! Please continue! I never had fantasies of my father but this is frkn hottt!
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Anonymous02/01/13
Next chapter
I love this story and hope you finish it soon, i hate being kept in suspense.
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Anonymous08/01/13
IN SUPENSE
Wow is all I have to say! You should finish this soon!! I can't wait for the ending!! Your story line is brilliant :)
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Anonymous11/11/14
A novel?
I hope this will be continued as it is both very sexy and unusually well written. A nice idea to include a real story, which makes the work cry for further growth. Anyway, you can really write in the pro sense of the term.
I expect to see part 9 soon, take your time writing it. Build our expectations to the fullest. This is a Synphonie of erotism, it needs an end that will make it la crème de la crème. (the cream of the cream)
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Anonymous01/16/15
what next??
I'm dying to know What happens next? !!!!
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Anonymous05/18/15
9
PLEASE MAKE A PART 9,10…etc. !!!!!!!!!!!! I LOVED THIS STORY
English
HOTTT!!!
I think every girl has had the fantasy about her daddy; you just made me wish I had made mine a reality! SUPER HOT!
keep going!!!!
I love this series so much. I think you should have the daughter get pregnant next and see how you can develop more into the new relationship between her and her dad. I would personally like to see the Culvers go down but you are the author so you know best.
OMG!!!!
You're my father and my Alec, that dialogue gave me the shivers. Your characters are so real, and the erotism is so freaking hot! I am enjoying this story so much. Please keep writing.
hrmm....
like others, I struggled through the first 4~ chapters, after that, I didnt touch it until I saw this one pop up, read 5-8 until I got to this:
""I know I'm right." Culver said. "He'll use her for our purposes and then leave her. All this was just for show. We'll get our way. We always do.""
After that portion, I couldn't actually read the rest, I literally had to skim through to the end, and I think the following chapters are going to be much of the same skimming until the Culver's get what should RIGHTFULLY be coming to them, and no, I dont mean for the incest part of it, I mean for the downright evil people they really show themselves to be in the story, they need to be punished, and the rest of the board members who are obliviously also pawns in his scheme need redemption, maybe Culver gets a hand up on Alec and they come in to save the say or tip the scales....
Either way, this story is at the tipping point, from being another downhill into oblivion story of pointless'ness.
Oh God
You made it seem so real so alive. Alec and Elise are great keep writing. I wish I had a relationship like theirs with my dad.
wow!
im sitting on the edge of my seat the more i read.. I wake up in the mornings looking to see if the next chapter has been posted!! Please continue! I never had fantasies of my father but this is frkn hottt!
Next chapter
I love this story and hope you finish it soon, i hate being kept in suspense.
IN SUPENSE
Wow is all I have to say! You should finish this soon!! I can't wait for the ending!! Your story line is brilliant :)
A novel?
I hope this will be continued as it is both very sexy and unusually well written. A nice idea to include a real story, which makes the work cry for further growth. Anyway, you can really write in the pro sense of the term.
Nice
It was good... Thanks
Where is part 9 Its not finished right ?
I expect to see part 9 soon, take your time writing it. Build our expectations to the fullest. This is a Synphonie of erotism, it needs an end that will make it la crème de la crème. (the cream of the cream)
what next??
I'm dying to know What happens next? !!!!
9
PLEASE MAKE A PART 9,10…etc. !!!!!!!!!!!! I LOVED THIS STORY
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