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by Anonymous

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by Jim4444411/16/12

What is the connection?

Other than the card was hanging on the Christmas tree there was no connection of this story to the contest theme. Character development was nearly non-existent.

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by Bibliophile61412/01/12

I agree

While the story was completely hot and I liked it. I agree with Jimm. No connection to the holidays. I also would have liked a bit more back story and maybe a little more description of the characters. The massive gang bang came as a shock as I was only expecting the Master. On a side note I find it hard to believe that she didn't come until after the fifth guy. Sluts got some damn good control if that's the case!

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