I see Jessica Simpson and Vin Diesel as the friends... and Slim Pickens as Pa... he returns to find the goings-on and yells "What in the Wide, Wide World of Sports is a-goin' on here!?"
But any girl with brothers knows what a cock is.
As the old joke goes "what's an Arkansas Virgin?" " A girl that can out run her brothers!"
Also they are bound to have animals and she could see them fucking.
At first the seven-day round trip into town made me think the 1890s, but Shaun's mention of blowjobs makes that unlikely. Also, Simone mentions riding to the river, but since she doesn't have a horse, did she go by bicycle? If so, that's another pointer to more modern times. And yet she appears completely ignorant of even the most rudimentary sex education. As others have pointed out, she has parents and brothers, and lives on a farm; how can she be so dumb?
No matter how "cute" you tried to make it, it still was a rape.
His "stranger to friend" ruse sounded like some "game" that a pedophile would use to trick a child into doing something sexual.
Also, I found it difficult to believe that a young woman who had grown up in the woods, surrounded by nature, would not know what this guy was actually doing.
Also, she lives with a father and brothers, but doesn't know what a penis is, and that it becomes "swollen" at times?
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Anonymous11/24/12
Its porn
Its a porn site, and everyone has a different opinion. If you dont like it, to bad. Thats no reason to go calling it rape and saying this author did spmething wrong. Leave the poor guy alone
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Anonymous11/26/12
unlikely
an 18year old mountain girl - who has no idea about sex, impossible she has never seen farm animals mating - unlikely. Never seen a cock - unlikely.
sex was too shallow, too quick. story was inconsistant..
English
Cute!!
I see Jessica Simpson and Vin Diesel as the friends... and Slim Pickens as Pa... he returns to find the goings-on and yells "What in the Wide, Wide World of Sports is a-goin' on here!?"
Yes Cute!
But any girl with brothers knows what a cock is.
As the old joke goes "what's an Arkansas Virgin?" " A girl that can out run her brothers!"
Also they are bound to have animals and she could see them fucking.
I e=really enjoyed this tale
However, I have the strong feeling that its not finished. Nice start, but you've only just begun!
She doesn't know what a cock is, but does know the word 'pussy'?
Was she dropped on her head as an infant?
When is this story set?
At first the seven-day round trip into town made me think the 1890s, but Shaun's mention of blowjobs makes that unlikely. Also, Simone mentions riding to the river, but since she doesn't have a horse, did she go by bicycle? If so, that's another pointer to more modern times. And yet she appears completely ignorant of even the most rudimentary sex education. As others have pointed out, she has parents and brothers, and lives on a farm; how can she be so dumb?
Do you plan setting the sequel nine months later?
Creepy
No matter how "cute" you tried to make it, it still was a rape.
His "stranger to friend" ruse sounded like some "game" that a pedophile would use to trick a child into doing something sexual.
Also, I found it difficult to believe that a young woman who had grown up in the woods, surrounded by nature, would not know what this guy was actually doing.
Also, she lives with a father and brothers, but doesn't know what a penis is, and that it becomes "swollen" at times?
Its porn
Its a porn site, and everyone has a different opinion. If you dont like it, to bad. Thats no reason to go calling it rape and saying this author did spmething wrong. Leave the poor guy alone
unlikely
an 18year old mountain girl - who has no idea about sex, impossible she has never seen farm animals mating - unlikely. Never seen a cock - unlikely.
sex was too shallow, too quick. story was inconsistant..
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