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So Sweet, Susan's Hands and Feet

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by Desejo11/16/12

This is cute

Just a couple of suggestions:
If there's men I want to know,/I point my toes and wiggle at them. - consider a change to: If there is a man I want to know/ I point my toes and wiggle at him.
My soft hands don't look well worn - suggest My hands soft and well formed.
Not sure about "unripe for wedding bands" - maybe wary of? or afraid of?
Thanks for posting in any case!

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by tazz31711/16/12

AN EXCELLENT USE OF ON-HAND RESOURCES

and an exit door just in case, TK U MLJ LV NV

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by HarryHill11/18/12

For Taz

LMAO

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by HarryHill11/18/12

Cute subject

Make a nice profile poem

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by gperry284312/01/12

Just adorable.

The caption says it all.

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