All Comments on 'The Nanny Cam'

fag story with a cuck element.

Her mother is 'Martha' in the opening and 'Margaret' thereafter - but I'm happy to say she made 'planes' to see her.

I can't really comment on the writing style because I skimmed most of it - but the bits I glanced at seemed juvenile at best. You'll really have to up your game if you hope to get more than 1*

You have a sick twisted mind. Mother and daughter? Husband has gay trysts on the nanny cam? You are a psychiatrists dream.

HA Ha ha

Horrible story

You just don´t get it. How about quitting your tries on writing and start something else, singing or walking in the rain, for instance? Honestly: This story sucks!

Or let your boy friend try a story. Better yet just go away

the typical American family and it's indulgences. 5*

To those who write negative comments on these stories - you just clicked on a cuck story that was clearly marked! What did you expect to read? A story about santa and his little elves?! Get over yourselves!!

same old UK cuck loving BS

Hate men much?

It is not erotic. Just plain stupid. Fetish maybe.Why write such silliness.Very poor story.Like I said non erotic

correct me if im wrong but for the wife to cuckold the husband doesn't she need to cheat on him，and what the wife is actually doing is actuallly doing is feeding him q creqm pie？ mind you i too just skimmed so i may have missed that part.

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in it is a bunch of lies put that together with a stupid story and we get an idiot who has to write and prove it.

enjoyed the story . It was very well done and left me wanting to read the next parts of how she makes him pay for what he's done. Hope she fucks his big dicked friend right in front of him and make him sleep on the floor while the guy bangs her all night. hope her mom helps too

She could divorce his a$$, find a heterosexual man to love and allow him to find love with another gay man. But that would be the typical reaction and not at all a Literotica story!

sickening

and the storm is a-coming. TK U MLJ LV NV

Hubby being in sissy gay roles is not consistent with what little we know about him! Sweetie & Mom conspiracy is very bizarre and there is NO prior alert to this characteristic in either one! It sounds (from Mom discussion about Dad) that more chapters await you! (NOT this reader, though!)

2*

As someone already wrote, the natural reaction would be a divorce; but that's not likely to happen. Why not? I have no fucking clue.

all I know is this piece of shit story belongs in fetish. And the mother belongs in concrete shoes at the bottom of the ocean.

Not only is this in the wrong category, should be fetish, it is in dire need of major editing.

This is written so much like a story by a bitter woman. Do you see yourself in the protagonist husband in these stories? My condolences.

I think this has possibilities as for as the story line. That fact that some people don't like it because it's about cuckholding is no surprise. I think if you go for more chapters, you should provide a warning before the story so maybe these people will go elsewhere (though that never happens). I do agree that you need to edit or find someone to do it for you. To edit your own stories is very hard because you sometimes don't actually read the words you've written, your mind reads what it knows it should be. I do hope there is more and good luck with it.

3 stars.

isn't this a fag story? guy sucks off another guy sure sounds like a fag story.

this story line has potential for more and I hope you continue it

I just have a couple of comments on the story itself

1. Can I suggest using an editor, as there are a number of grammatical errors

2. remeber your character's names and stick with them.

please continue

I can't wait to see where this goes next! Please continue this as a series!

I enjoy cuckold stories, but this one was poorly written and was more of a gay male story than a cuck story.

I've been checking for a part 2 for a few days. Hoping to read about hubby eating an unsuspected creampie after wife is out for the evening.

Please continue this story soon - can't wait to see where it goes. Well written so far.

Love to see his pride and spirit go as he's broken in. More.

The story didn't flow well at all. And the premise doesn't seem plausible. He's depressed from being out of work. And it seems he's at least bi-sexual. But what makes her think he'll allow himself to be put in panties, put in a cage or cucked? It would be far more believable to think that when she tried he would simply divorce her, ask for and get alimony and move on. She has lost on every single level imaginable.

I bet this wimp had a hard time finding his first job that is now lost. He fills his time with Anon bi or gay guys getting sucked off or fucking his tight pussy. He has a rep now and chastity will not stop him from sucking cock or getting his pussy fucked and bred. But maybe wife wants him that way. LOL He is so fucked and yet does not know it.

After all, he's risking her life. Ever hear about aids, stds and other social diseases? He's taking a horrible chance. Why would she stay with him? It makes no sense. I gave you a "1".

When they came to cuckold him, he was gone. As were all of his things. And the bank accounts were closed. And the credit cards cancelled. Her cell phone didn't work - yep - it was cancelled too. Ten days later she was served with divorce papers. She never saw or talked to her husband again. He had disappeared. I guess she got the message

First of all, only his wife can make him a cuckold. But since they both were whores what was the use of sticking around? He was packed and gone by friday. The only time they heard from him was when his attorney filed for divorce. Once again you imagine a man that doesn't react, but simply sits there and lets women abuse and torture him. And you think that's interesting or fun to read? Think again. This was garbage.

your mothers. 5 for effort

She fucks another man and Bill files for a divorce. He forces the sale of the house, gets half of that and all their investments AND he gets alimony from his wife because she's working and he isn't! And he is STILL gonna have his boyfriend! Laughably bad story. Poorly thought out and miserably written. Add to that the fact that this garbage belongs in gay male and this wasn't worth reading.

Someone thought this was well wriien. Someone thinks it is a plausible story. Someone wants more. Someone has mental problems, as well as a lack of taste.

You got my cock hard! Next chapter please

Well this trash cant be unseen.

In fact no one should ever have seen it but we have and you need to never write again.

And Friday Bill would spend divorcing her.

it's too bad this writer always starts a great story, but NEVER HAS WROTE THE NEXT CHAPTER, to any of his stories!!

To bad there never was a second chapter..

Filth.