All Comments on 'Discovering Rachael Ch. 01'

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TigerladyandhimTigerladyandhimover 11 years ago

Well we definitely need a few more chapters. Well written.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
More Please!

Very promising beginning, please carry on!

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Surprised, or merely amazed beyond belief? 5+ Stars! Worth exploring in submission 2?

Great fantasy is worth further investigation.

ErotonautErotonautover 11 years ago
Lucky escape

The pool guy could very easily have taken her actions as an invitation. Indeed, maybe they were and this event is less exhibitionism than a wish for someone else between her legs other than hubby.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Cum

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Too short

Your stories always seem to end just as they are getting good.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Mmmm yes

I used to tease Derrick, our neighbor's son who would clean our pool in exchange for using it every so often. I bought tiny little bikinis that I never wore around my husband. After about the fourth time of watching him get hard in his trunks, I decided to lay out naked and pretend in didn't know he was coming over. I teased that boy mercilessly. Finally I had had enough of diddling my clit after he left. I asked him to rub sunscreen on me. By the time he was done, I was naked and he had his 17 year old cock buried in me. Derrick still uses our pool to this day. And I use his hard cock.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
MORE EPISODES NEEDED

This is soooooooooo HOT!!!! Makes me cum every time!!!

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