this Andy guy is really peace of shit...he doesn't deserve anything...I hope he ends up alone in some shitty cold cabin rest of his life...moron
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Anonymous11/20/12
andy
Andy is like most actors, so full of himself. He is like a child. Nat is a messed up
girl with money that can`t take care of herself. He needs to grow up before
he drives nat to kill or hurt herself. The parents are nuts also. Nat needs
help. waiting to see how you end this mess.
This was, in many ways, the best thing in this series, even without any actual sex. It really brought out the conflict in Andy's mind, as well as Natalie's psychic immaturity. Can she quickly grow up, so he can demonstrate his love for her without feeling like he's fucking a child? He has already overcome the social and legal no-nos.That seems to be the main thing working on the back of his mind and distancing him. I hope Jessica stays out of the sexual mix, and becomes the catalyst Natalie needs. to become an adult. Ch 06, please - and soon! It could be a toughie!
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Anonymous11/21/12
Great story
Andy is going to be fucking them both soon! Little Natalie is a perfect little sex kitten, any man would want her! The question is will Andy get all his sisters in a harem?
A lot of brothers have sex with thier sisters, might be one in five.
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Anonymous11/25/12
Sad story
I've never seen a sex story like this one. Heck, I even started to tear up at some parts.
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Anonymous11/28/12
Please hurry
For goodness sake Mark please get to work we all need to know what happens next
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Anonymous11/30/12
Good Story
This is a great story - I'm a guy and I'm hurting for Natalie, please don't let her crash and burn...
this Andy guy is really peace of shit...he doesn't deserve anything...I hope he ends up alone in some shitty cold cabin rest of his life...moron
andy
Andy is like most actors, so full of himself. He is like a child. Nat is a messed up
girl with money that can`t take care of herself. He needs to grow up before
he drives nat to kill or hurt herself. The parents are nuts also. Nat needs
help. waiting to see how you end this mess.
This was, in many ways, the best thing in this series, even without any actual sex. It really brought out the conflict in Andy's mind, as well as Natalie's psychic immaturity. Can she quickly grow up, so he can demonstrate his love for her without feeling like he's fucking a child? He has already overcome the social and legal no-nos.That seems to be the main thing working on the back of his mind and distancing him. I hope Jessica stays out of the sexual mix, and becomes the catalyst Natalie needs. to become an adult. Ch 06, please - and soon! It could be a toughie!
Great story
Andy is going to be fucking them both soon! Little Natalie is a perfect little sex kitten, any man would want her! The question is will Andy get all his sisters in a harem?
A lot of brothers have sex with thier sisters, might be one in five.
Sad story
I've never seen a sex story like this one. Heck, I even started to tear up at some parts.
Please hurry
For goodness sake Mark please get to work we all need to know what happens next
Good Story
This is a great story - I'm a guy and I'm hurting for Natalie, please don't let her crash and burn...
Andy is a jerk. There's no other way to put it, he is a total jerk. Now wonder he is going to fail as a movie star.
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