All Comments on 'Ashes'

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Ashesh9Ashesh9over 11 years ago
Ashes to ashes , dust to dust !

If murder does' t kill you , Old age must !!!

Ashesh9Ashesh9over 11 years ago
Demure , if you jst add "h9 " to your poetry title you get my name !!!

Regards , A9

tazz317tazz317over 11 years ago
IF THAT IS A FINAL WISH

do the pyre in an arid desert. TK U MLJ LV NV

HarryHillHarryHillover 11 years ago
Cosmic

return ...but don't forgo those that care to wake you away to do so....

DawnJDawnJover 11 years ago
Funerary celebrations

I like this poem. I agree with this speaker in his desire for a celebration of his life. My funeral plans include lots of singing and tambourine-playing and hand-clapping...like church, where I grew up. No mourning for me, please!

twelveoonetwelveooneabout 11 years ago
wow

that was a brilliant observation, ashes

greyish fluffiness this is nice. counterintuitive, never saw a combo like that, but you do this too rarely

5ed

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