by susieq76
to have any real value. The writer is in too much of haste to get into the action so we get to know nothing about the characters and it makes it unengaging.
Way too short... You got a great idea...and topic...Got to stirring then hit the cliff
Bullshit
Claude would have driven straight to the villa, and the three of them would have banged her ALL night! She might have let Hubby into the mix from time to time (mostly during resolution time for the Frogs, which is often brief). Naps might have been taken the next morning, but Sweetie would have had to nap during some of the drilling!
Therefore, I think this is pure fiction from an under-active imagination! Keep trying!
And worst of all you never even spanked her when you got home...4*
with the pretense of marriage when in truth you live with a slut and you don't care. Let me ask you when other men fuck your "wife" how on earth does that benefit you ?
Rather than being an erotic story with character development, plot, etc., this story is only porn.
Even drunk, Sue's alarm bells should have started ringing the moment her dress was pulled down and her tits popped out. The fact that she went down on one guy before fucking the other two, whilst her husband made no move to intervene (fantasising in the privacy of the bedroom is one thing, acting the fantasy out another entirely), shines a perhaps uncomfortable light onto their relationship. They need to have a long discussion.
....." Her nipples stood out like organ stops....".
Fucking brilliant. Thank you. Keep me, uhmmm, I mean them, the stories, cumming ;)