All Comments on 'A Jackson Family Christmas'

That was an incredible piece of writing. I only wish there enough of us to be like him. What a world that would be. Great character development. A moving love story This guy has it all, and I don't think he knows it.

the Eagle gives it two talons up....

Love from the eagle.

Please continue! Begs to be a series!

Hope this continues! You've got the characters down perfectly. Love the back and forth banter. Please keep the story going.

Great start to what can be a very good story .I am hoping that you will have Dil,Lex and Sam end up all together . For ever . Thanks and can't wait for the next 20 chapters or so .

Great job with Dillon's character. A most enjoyable read.

Great banter. A little hard to keep up with sometimes, but shows real incite.The sex was great too.

It's about time we get a good one on here. 99% of the stories on here these days are shit, written by wanna-be retreads. This one had lots of thought put into it. Good job!

You, my dear, are fantastic. You're also my 5th 5 star ever, so you should feel very proud! Thank you for such an awesome read! Dillion reminds me a lot of myself, lucky bastard!

What a great opening can't wait to see where the story leads.

That was an awesome story...well written. Witty and sensual. Please give us more.5E

...and a really good voice. The POV got a bit confused at times, but the characterisation carried it through, and the humour rocked.

Warning to desperate guys: don't ever try to fuck a table saw.

I loved the witty banter. Humorous, insightful, filled with hints of what once happened with enough uncertainty about what might happen in the future to keep it intriguing. Unlike so many stories where big boobs are the only physical attraction the women in this story were each ashamed, or at least uncertain of their own bodies. But each was just the body to which the cousin/brother was attracted. Although, there are enough hints in this to believe he wasn't too fussy in other venues. Wonderful story. Looking for more.

......"Really? Walk around with a hardon sometime. I don't even know where it goes or what it does half the time. It just wanders off without me. Hours later it comes home smelling like booze and blondes. I can't even get it to talk about it. It's like it doesn't even respect me anymore." ......

my stomach hurts from laughing....so damn good funny

this needs a major rewrite using a GOOD EDITOR OR GHOST WRITER. way to many stupid errors that SHOULD have been caught in proofreading and WOULD have been caught by a GOOD EDITOR.

I truly appreciate the feedback. Glad you all liked it. I entered this into the Holiday Contest so due to the rules can’t make it a series. I will sit down and try to think up a storyline for the Jackson Family. Dillon is a kick in the ass for me to write. Not sure where his moral compass is, but that’s the fun part with him.

Loved your story can't wait for the next chapter. Let me know when you post it!

you post a story for the holiday contest yet it is a totally unfinished story. contest entries are suposed to be COMPLETE stories from start to finish which in this case means incest (sibling sex) which we don't have here so as a contest entry it FAILS BIG TIME.

Incest is generally defined as taboo sex with any family member too close to marry within the legal confines of our society. Which means mother, father, brother, sister, aunt, uncle, or cousins. Samantha was a first cousin and qualifies. You could throw in Grandma Irene if you wanted to. To the point of it being unfinished, I try to leave hope and longing as the ending to stories sometimes. The only true ending is death if you wanted to get all metaphysical, and then someone would debate that point as well. I'm sorry you didn't like the story.

the title of my comment says it all I want another Chapter. Please?

I realize the advantage of allowing one's imagination to have free rein by not finishing the story...but in this case, I am not enjoying my imagination, I am truly enjoying yours. So, yes, more would be appreciated.

Love it -- great characters! Please write more!

I hope you win the contest

after reading your story it made me realize i never really knew what love is.

dont stop writing.

you have a passion very few people have.

keep sharing it !

I would be willing to read anything you write after this. 5 stars. Absolutely brilliant.

I don't know about the rest of your readers, but as a girl, I find dillon irresistible. I mean, he's charming, good looking, great with kids, funny and has a quirky side. COME ON GIVE THE REAL MEN A CHANCE. are you a female writer?

As a guy, I generally don't care too much what I'm reading when I get myself off, sometimes I like a quickie and sometimes I take it slow just to enjoy myself, but getting off is generally the main goal. Now...your writing, is quite unique, and I'm pretty sure I've -never- had to suppress snickers and laughter during the more erotic sections of a story before, and without it detracting from the scene what-so-ever. Your writing is absolutely fantastic and you should bloody well do more...so we don't run out of -fantastic- material to read.

Yours sincerely,

A typical horny guy ;)

It seems as if Samantha and Dillon have a history together that I hope is brought out in another chapter.

Samantha and Dillon seem to be the perfect couple, or at least Samantha seems to be in love with Dillon.

It was so sweet the way Dillon made love to his sister Alexis, and I would like to read about the "things" he is going to do to her for the 8 days until christmas.

Also, I hope to see a threesome with Alexis, Samantha and Dillon. That would be so good to read, how the three of them were together, and how they find that it would be perfect if the three of them lived together, along with Samantha's baby.

I hope we find out who is the father of Samantha's baby, since it wasn't Dillon's because that was the first time he fucked her when they made love.in his little shed of a room.

A great read, and a fantastic well written and edited story.

Thanks...

I'm seriously disappointed that I can't rate this a 10. It's erotic and sensual, has characters you both believe and care for, and has some of the funniest dialog I've read for years.

David F.

Sex is supposed to have some wit and humour - like apple pie and custard...

the two go together.

Please keep on writing - this was highly enjoyable - Thank You !

This is the best written combination of sex and humor I have ever seen...and I've read a decent amount of sex and a decent amount of humor. Dillon's wry approach to everything perfectly matches my own, except he's a lot better at it. The build up is good, the actual sex parts are good...Keep writing this, it's a lot of fun to read. Not to mention scintillating ^_^

Dillon's character was written beautifully. I could definitely see this turning into a series. Your writing style brings a pleasure and easy to reading. Thank you!

What an intelligently written, funny story. Dillion's whit was perfect. The interaction with his cousin was so relatable. Dillion's love for these women was beautiful and heart warming. These was no mention of Dillon's assets, either. The scenario could actually be taken seriously. I sure hope that this is chapter one.

Thank you for your effort.

Please continue this story.

Brillant! Thank you

This story without a doubt has the funniest jokes I have read on this site.

By far the funniest fucking thing I have read in a long ass time...the jokes in this storyare hilarious and I can't wait to read the rest of these "jackson" stories!

Dillon is is by far my favorite male protagonist, witty as fuck. I really like this series, this is the 2nd time I read it, waiting for ch. 07

my first 5-star and you deserve it..

Loved the Story with Dillon's humour.

Just a thought - is there a way of combining' A Jackson Family Christmas' with this series so that other readers don't lose the "trail' - possibly renaming the family Christmas as Chapter 01 - or embedding it in The Family Christmas Ch-01??

Great work, in any event!!

the third story of yours I've read-first Jackson-SO glad you've expanded it-really looking forward to the rest

Superb dialogue, great development of characters!

bugger the contest rules. It is frustrating to have to search the publish date to sort the reading sequence. If one finds the Jackson series first the back story is missing, and the backstory is needed for those that follow to develop their full meaning. I arrived after discovering The Jackson series and wondering just how each coupling came to be.

Having voiced my rant let me tell you I loved this opening tease. Your use of humour to poke jabs at "guys" who just don't get it. The steady banter enhances the undercurrent of sexual tension.

Thank You

Just brilliant. Thanks a lot and please continue writing.

What a great little story. THANKS.

Excellent story telling. Excellent.

Wow got chills from the last word "things" .... Awesome

Just another quick wham bam thank you maam story without any real story in it. I guess most readers are easy to please seeing the high rating

on here have no ending. Others go on and on when they should have stopped. Really sad the way writers think. Many need therapy. I think the stories that are not finished should be deleted or denied being published till they are.