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by Redbud317

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tazz317tazz317over 11 years ago
FIRST...LAST....AND ONLY

doesnt have longevity involved, TK U MLJ LV NV

erectus123erectus123over 11 years ago
keep truck'en, errr fuck'en

starts nicely but concludes poorly, needs work, kill last lines, go for smoother language flow, observational comments to 3rd party reader kill intimacy

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