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Great title
and the poem just rolls along and hits the reader with one image or sense memory after another to tell the story. I might lose a word here and there, but I'm nitpicky that way. Really good stuff, Remec.
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with the taste of bubble gum and mint, TK U MLJ LV NV
Lovely and evocative...
what more could I want?
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